it's cute but there were some spelling mistakes: wirl=whirl and starring=staring...that's all...

anyway, i like it...hope you can make a story out of it...it's really cute!

nice! i'm not a big poetry person but this is good!

Cute.

Oh! That was good! Really good! I liked it!

Aw, so cute!
Ash xx

aw, a very nice poem.

That is so romantic, you are so great with poems!