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| Becky 2006-07-25 ch 9, anon. | abuseAmazing... I loved the whole thing. So great. |
| Kaelyn 2006-07-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseYou guys write so well! I get lost in the story so easily :) Even though Logan and Rory ended up together (which I'll forgive you for because I know neither of you really wanted it to happen), the story had some very good ideas: the simple way of Rory's thought process when she's pouring her heart out to Logan- then apologizes for not calling, the resolution of the epilogue,... um, I should have written them down while I was reading it. Oh well. Basically, I loved the story :) |
| Agabus Crowe 2006-07-06 ch 6, anon. | abuseClaire, like I say every time I read your writing, I love the emotion. I really felt the parting between Dean and Rory, I liked how you tied it up, it really had the feeling of finality. I also like the way you told the story between Logan and Rory at the end, it was very life like, and real. I'm really enjoying this story, and I didn't think I would because I'm no Gilmore Girls fan. You two have done an excellent job. |
| Kaelyn 2006-06-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseIt's so great, guys! Keep it up! :) |
| cmonace 2006-06-24 ch 6, | abusei loved it. and i loved the lip gloss, it was adorable. great job. can't wait for more. =) |
| heavenleigh88 2006-06-13 ch 5, | abusethis is a good story so far i can't wait for somemore rogan interaction. |
| renee Brace 2006-06-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseOH NO! LOGAN ! DEAN IS PRE LAW!! oh man what about jess?oh man good stuff... |
| Renee Brace 2006-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, i love how you write with detail. Definatley kept my interest. But super sad! poor rory! boys suck!okay anways cant wait to read more:) |
| Opy 2006-05-26 ch 3, | abuseGood job. I like it, nice idea, you are doing well with it. Keep updating! |
| cmtaylor531 2006-05-26 ch 3, | abuseWOW i love it so far. Its awesome. I love the dream. Cause we all know rory has always had problems making a decision. Cant wait for more! |
| Becky 2006-05-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseIntrigue... what is it that Lorelai wants her to do? Update soon! |
| Becky 2006-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... the interaction between Logan and Rory is really good. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the characters. |
| cmonace 2006-05-23 ch 2, | abuseexcellent job on both chapters. but may i suggest slightly longer chapters? other than that, it's very good. continue and update soon. =) |
| Kaelyn 2006-05-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love how you guys get into Rory's head like that. I think it really does sound like Rory :). Good work! |