Reviews for Lucy Pevensie and The Cursed Wardrobe

Reviews For: Lucy Pevensie and The Cursed Wardrobe

princess-eli 2008-03-08 ch 2,	abuseo god update please
Narnialover/Princess Lucy 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseAll right I suggest you rewrite this story your facts are all wrong Lucy is eight years old not fifteen years old if she was fifteen they would not be at the professor's house and the war would have been over >I don't know why no one else caught that mistake .I know this review is a bit late,but if you do read it please rewrite and give Lucy a proper age of eight years old not fifteen Peter is fifteen ,Susan is thirteen and Edmund is eleven
magicgrl07 2007-12-14 ch 2,	abusei hope u update soon though this is good!
Deitra Pawley 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI know this is fanfiction but lets get a few things straight here Lucy's age she is between the ages of seven and ten so when Harry calls hera teenager he is wrong unless that was a typo .I'm sorry I dont mean to sound petty but it irks me when people dontget the ages even remotely close ,other than that little detail the story was good
Keepsake16 2006-07-30 ch 2,	abuseis lucy dead she can't be dead wyhy is she dead why am i so into this story please update soon after you get back
Starskysea 2006-06-01 ch 2,	abuseOh! Well, first of all, wow, nice second chapter, I can't wait to see whats next! Second of all, LUCKY YOU! Going to what--Las Vegas and LA?! All I can say is: HAVE FUNN!
Starskysea 2006-05-23 ch 1,	abuseThe idea is absolutely awesome, although you should have elaborated on her thoughts upon entering the "new world" more... Also, some things don't seem to stick very well with th general idea from both books, like the fact that Harry actually told the girl he was a wizard and what his name was and all to Lucy, a muggle, without knowing (or did he know) the fact that the house where she stayed was the old HQ...but I'm just ranting on about details, don't take it TOO seriously! All in all, the story's great! Update!

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