I love this so far! Please continue it ASAP. I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter!

keep writing, this is getting good!

I like it but I think it needs more rachel and tobias interaction.

Very good story so far. It has a good plot and will be one of the bigger strories when finished but is cool.

Funny! Interesting! Keep writing!

Ohh, so that's Marco's new morph, that other time he half morphed Jake, right? That explains much. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Okay, they hit a speed bump, where is this heading?

*Sigh* You had my hopes up, at first I thought Marco was going to screw his DNA mixing morph and become a girl. Who knows, maybe he'll do the shopping thing with Rachel hehehe. Oh well, Let's hope Marco doesn't get a split personality or something okay? A Marco who gets used to be called 'Mitchell' loves animals and the barn...That can't be good. Great work so far.

You haven't muddled up your characters; they're original. Hmmm, I wonder what the favor is, why's he nervous anyway?

This is your first fic? Great work! And an actual plot! But hey, you do realize there is something a bit disturbing when you mix Jake and French, I can’t seem to get French words out of his mouth, but it’s a cool fic, looks like it’ll have potential, I’m reading the other chapters...right now.

Cool! Write more! I especially like that you write like the real books! Plus, the part with Illim; cuz I'm just a Yeerk-Peace type person.I'm in suspense so keep writing!

Nice :) I'm looking forwards to more.

Hey this is cool! It has good dialouge, and a good plot and side action! Keep writing!

Wow. This is the first Animorphs story of any worth that I've seen in a while. I mean, this is on the caliber of KA Applegate herself. I love your writing style so keep it up. Sorry I only had time to review the first chapter, but I have saved your story and will come back and review as soon as I'm done. Keep up the good work! _

Looks like it's going to be a good fanfic, especially for a first one. Can't wait to read the next chapters to come.

adios!