Reviews for Air and darkness

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Random 2008-04-05 ch 8, anon.	abuseGood story. Matched their characters pretty well, and funny here and there too. I think if this were to happen in the anime/manga, this would be how it happened, or something very similar to this. Great story... Will there be a part two?
Dom 2008-04-03 ch 8, anon.	abuseThis was totally awesome! Totally matched the characteristics of the characters and was really well-planned and written. Description was great too! Improvements: If possible, could you add a picture to each chapter or a title would be good too! You should think about being an author if you aren't already one!
xxguesswhoxx 2008-04-02 ch 8,	abuseso there's more right?
InosBane 2008-02-03 ch 8,	abuseThis is such and amazing story I respect your decision about the canon, but that last kiss almost had me in tears!
InosBane 2008-02-03 ch 3,	abuseChouji is a zen master!
The Sin of Existance 2008-02-03 ch 8,	abuseThat's good. Really good. I loved it.
yumi-maki 2007-11-18 ch 8,	abuseOK all I have to say is I'm sorry - I read this fic before and never reviewed. On to the review... I LOVE THIS FIC! It's up there with the best Shikatema fics I've read and it is definitely the funniest. I really like their initial fights, especially when they fought just before his parents came and at the training grounds and over the bed. The part with the ANBU was the best tho - so funny! and then Shika's reaction when he realized that they were no longer fighting was hilarious. I was surprised he didn't come up with a better plan tho considering how smart he's supposed to be. The parts with everyone's reactions to their 'marriage' was really quite funny as well! This fic was really quite amusing and entertaining - I just breezed through the chapters because they were so good. I like the beginning with Gaara being all protective of Temari and the end with Kankurou being all grossed out. The final confrontation thingie when Shika killed those Rock ninja was great! It had me on the edge of my seat and I was so shocked when he went off on the guy (the one who wanted to marry Temari). I was just as shocked as everyone else that he was so angry. Also the endng - of course I wanted her to stay but at the same time, I'm glad that she left. It suited her, I think. My only question is abbout the time - you said it's set in the time skip but then Shikamaru would have been like 13, 14 at the time. That was the one thing that threw me off with this fic. That said, very good fic. I was very impressed. Amazing...fantastico!
Mungo 2007-11-04 ch 8, anon.	abuseThat was a brilliant fic, and the ending was perfect. (Though could prove problematic if they decided to have kids.) I loved Tsunade in this! Thanks for writing it!
peppermint quartz 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseLoved your pacing and characterization - so very ShikaTema :)
Shad0w Zero 2007-09-19 ch 8,	abuseAww. What a touching story. I liked this TemarixShikamaru story. It should be more of a romance/humor. I love it!
beerbelly 2007-09-08 ch 8,	abusewow... you really made an awesome job! i just love your story!! i've read it twice already and i still can't get enough of it! ^_^ i wish you could write a sequel of it, if not a sequel at least another story with shikaXtema pairing, i just love those 2 together XD ...again, awesome job!!
kittykittyphuphu 2007-08-13 ch 8,	abusethis is my all time favorite!
xKRAZExKOOLxKUIDxKATx 2007-07-26 ch 1,	abusehahahah omg i absolutely love this story
Viridian 2007-07-22 ch 8,	abuseCute story! I agree that this ending works quite well. They're too young to be committed to something like this anyway (and I guess they're not 12 ... I forgot that this is -during- the time skip).
Viridian 2007-07-22 ch 2,	abuseOh my goodness ... poor, unsuspecting Shikamaru! He walks in a chuunin ready for a mission, and walks out a married 12-year-old! XD

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