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Fuebi
2007-04-08 . chapter 11
sweetness! XD
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Wandering Hitokiri
2007-04-07 . chapter 1
Awesomeness!
Fuebi
2006-11-09 . chapter 10
aw no fare! oh well i hope you update soon! LOVED IT! XD
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Fuebi
2006-11-09 . chapter 5
HOLKY **. UNEXPECTED! XD
Moonlight and Music
2006-08-19 . chapter 9
Wow. This fanfic is amazing! I can't wait for the update!
~Kat
MissButton
2006-06-12 . chapter 9
ohh that sucks. -wipes tear- wahh so sad. on a lighter note al is saving the world one kitty at a time.

caya
Tseng no Chibi-san
2006-06-11 . chapter 9
O_O

Sora :: O__O Not another valve.

-WAILS-

Yuffie :: -Smacks Rin- HUSH!

TT.TT But the baby died! x.x 'Tis depressing.

Yuffie :: You know, your niichan is gonna get so ** if he finds out that you're reading fanfiction and not playing FFVII like you said you were.

>_> Shush, I know, I just wanted to read this before I started up again. Good chappie! Sad, though...

Love,
Sora-chan
Rin-chan
and Yuffie-sama
MissButton
2006-06-07 . chapter 8
crepy, its good update soon

caya
Tseng no Chibi-san
2006-06-07 . chapter 8
Sora :: Don't listen to Rin when she screams "Name the kid Laesed" .. She has problems.

>_< I just so happen to like that name.

Wrath :: "hommculi" is spelt Homunculi

And even Wrath isn't sure o_O.

Wrath :: Shut up, Rin -_-

Tee hee...I don't actually mind fluff, I've just sort of had this overdose between script RP and FFVII o_O...

Sora :: Anyways!

Really good chapter! This one is one of the best so far, albeit short.

Wrath :: I swear you used that word wrong. Or maybe you spelt it wrong.

Wrath, go away x.x I'll kill words if I want to.

Anyways!

Love,
Sora-chan
Rin-chan
and Wrath-chan

(Gawd, long ranty review o.o Forgiveth moi)
snowbunny0405
2006-06-07 . chapter 7
AH! My review is late! I blame my computer, it is evil. Ok well I have some an idea but it the some part that irks me. But I think the idea is for Al. I HAVE TOO MANY IDEAS! Ok well The story is moving forward into the plot! Nice chapter. I love how Ed is so worried. It's so funny. Name the kid uh...I have no ideas...ok

Please fogive the late review!

Snow
Tseng no Chibi-san
2006-06-05 . chapter 7
Sora :: >_> Don't say anything, Rin.

But..but...

Sora :: No.

._. Fine.

Sora :: ^_^ We like this chapter, yes. Still kinda...filler...

Nah, 'cuz it's making the plot move forth! ^_^ Just don't overload us with fluff. I'm still sick due to some other...fluffy...occasions earlier.

...Name the kid Laesed!

Sora :: NO, RIN, NO.

._. Aw...

Love,
Sora-chan
Rin-chan
and the InuInu
snowbunny0405
2006-06-04 . chapter 6
Yay for fluff too! So happy! Yes...Can't wait for the next chapter...But I thought Havoc and his cigerattes...never mind... Update soon

Snow
Tseng no Chibi-san
2006-06-04 . chapter 6
-She stares at the chappie- Bit of a filler, kawaii.

Sora :: -Nods- ...

The review shall be abrupt because we're sort of paranoid right now.

Sora :: Yeah...good chapter, though.

Love,
A weirded out Sora-chan
And a scared to death Rin-chan
MissButton
2006-06-04 . chapter 6
i like it, ya know id expect havoc to burn down the stand, -mumbles- stupid ciggerettes. update soon

caya
MissButton
2006-06-03 . chapter 5
oh crap, poor ed. hopefully they wont be on maury( talk shouw)
update soon.

caya
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