this is the first yaoi i've read and to tell you the truth i kinda liked it.

very sweet.

I liked this very much :)

aw I want more
I liked everything... er well one exception I guess, Naru's physical descriptions... I guess i'm just used to him being described as looking more Kakashi like body shape wise anyway.. you know.. hm lol maybe that sounds really silly but i like the more feminine inturpritation

narushika's bringin' sexy back! nice story

AW I love it!...

Dude, I used to be your penpal.
I can see your stories have not changed, they still rule!
This was short but sweet, it made me smile! ~

I think you should make this multi-chaptered. I really loved it.

that was cute. sad but cute.

much love always

hope x

aw...this is so cute...

so cute love it
nicely done shikanaru
x

no! no fin!! We all need more of this! Woot, go shika/naru!!

Aw! Kawaii! I loved this! If you're going to write another chapter or a sequel, please update soon!

omg omg omg omg! THATW AS SO SWEET! aw and me, im normally not a yaoi fan but that was so sweet! only a few of these yaoi fics can catch my attenion. and that jux... AWW! I love it! tell me ur gonna continue! PLEASE!1

"reviews are a writer's wet dreams" Too damned true. Please continue, Shika helping Naru get over a broken heart sounds like a good fluffy fic. Keep it up.
A.S.