Reviews for Devil In Vegas City

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charliesgirl27 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseaw...that is soo cute! keep on writing!
SzmandaFanGirl2389 2006-06-19 ch 1,	abuseo gosh, i LOVED this story. It gave me some nice closure. SNICKERS FOREVER! thanks for writing it, it helped in my road to healing.
csialltheway 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseGreat
riversunshine 2006-06-02 ch 1,	abuseBeautifull, I just loved it! I love they together, don't like Sara with Grissom. Nicky is so sweet with her... Ah. Saludos!!
BeTrAyEd DaUgHtErS 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abuseAhh. That was lovely. I swear it rocked, I wish the that was the finale. Great work! Adios, Pau
NicoleDiver 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abuse“Okay, so I know it's almost a week later, but I HAD to write a response to the finale.” You just HAD to. That’s what bugs me about you shippers. You can’t be a little disappointed and just leave it at that. You have to go write a bunch of bitter stories to have other equally deluded reviewers claim that “ths is teh way it shuld of been!!1!”. Well, it wasn’t. Cry me a fing river. First cliché: Sara, the sobbing mess, runs to be saved by Nicky, the knight in shining armor. Give me a break. Second cliché: Sara comes looking for a shoulder to cry on over Grissom and ends up snogging passionately with the man who’s supposed to be comforting her. And what’s with Sara randomly taking off her clothes? And the power being out? And the candles, and all those convenient little details? A little contrived, don’t you think? Then, I must admit that I found the excessively long descriptions of Sara’s lack of garment rather disturbing. Yes, we know she’s half naked and vulnerable. Yes, we know Nick is turned on. Frankly, that’s more than we need to know. Leave it at that. “...she had emerged from a place she didn’t want to return.” Or rather, you* did not want her to return. “We hadn’t even kissed all month... I felt nothing, Nick. No spark. No instant love I was hoping for. I realized I was being courted by a fantasy, not real chemistry... My life wasn’t meant to be with Grissom...” There’s so much I could say about this. But I’ll keep it short - You wish. “Well...I hope this eased the minds of my fellow Snickers!” I don’t know, but it sure amused those of us who are more grounded in reality. “Reviews make my heart sing!” And silly shipper fics make me laugh. P.S.: What’s with the random bold type?
FaithRocks 2006-05-25 ch 1,	abuseIt did thank u
bauerfreak 2006-05-25 ch 1,	abuseAw...that was just about perfect!! I love all the vocabulary you used in this fic - it gives a lot of great imagery. Nick is such a sweet guy...if Sara doesn't get him, I should. No - I should just get him. Sorry, I'm selfish. :) Great job!!
adpi24 2006-05-25 ch 1,	abuseoH I love it. To bad that won't happen next season. LOL.we can only hope.
januarynineteen 2006-05-25 ch 1,	abuseAwesome! Loved this.
Jenny70529 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseYAY! Anti-GSR! My hero! The finale was horrific...I love stories that turn it back around to people cough her own age cough Awesome job, I thoroughly enjoyed it. You're fantastic! Jenny
CanIBeYou 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseI feel much better now, thanks
Shimigirl 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! I think that the whole grissom thing would be a really good story starter for a cool nicksara story! You should write one! Keep up the good work!
CSI3Snickers 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseAW! LOL. What a perfect scneario. Very realistic. This story made my heart sing, too! I loved Nick's thoughts. It was almost the same exact thoughts all Snickers have. Awesome work!
bubble cat 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseGreat story, you should write more~ n_s

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