that was awsome and please write the next chapter soon

the mystery story is graet

Hay you! yes you! Update this! do it now! Thanks :)

Who is at the door? or is that the question?

UPDATE PLEASE!

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You did NOT just go and do that! Do you realize how hooked I was on this story? I was dying to finish it so I could find out what happened, and then you, inconsiderate, non-updating YOU goes ahead and doesn't finish, doesn't even UPDATE after leaving a CLIFFHANGER? That is NOT nice! So, I'm gonna add this to my Story Alert in hopes that you'll be nice instead of EVIL and I'm gonna await an update. But if you don't update it, and I ever find you, you are DEAD! You hear me? DEAD! D, E, A, D DEAD!

Penelope, over and out!

(P.S. I apologize. My crazy half likes to take over when I get mad, so I end up saying and writing necessary things. All the same, let's aim for an update, hmm?)

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! x-x

I'm going to say this yet again: PLEASE UPLOAD SOON!

I figured out what the clues about the lemons and National Treasure mean! (I feel so happy for myself). Great story so far, I haven't read it all yet, but I suppose l'll be caught up soon.

This is a great story! I love all the suspense and the surprises! I really hope you haven't discontinued this story!

Please UPDATE SOON!

gaaaa! you left it there?

up date please! this is a good book!

No! You can't stop there! It's a total shame you haven't updated in FOREVER! Cuz I need to know what happens! waaaaaaaaahh! Also I think it has to do with the Lord of the Rings and maybe National Tresure, cuz Future Danny mentions them alot!

Happy writing! (yes i know you're all doing this)

I love the story. please write more soon.

It's danny fenton! How did he get into the house? where has been all this time? Is kimberly related to him?

I also wonder who that boy in the picture is. could it be danny from when he was still alive?

oh my! whose at the door? You are a really good writer and i really enjoyed your story :) Plz can you update soon, i'm wanting to read more of it.

please oh please update this is an awesome story that must not stop in the middle so please update, it's been a year and a half by now please update!

ok my old computer broke and it has taken 2 days for me to find this story again