Wowz. This is so0o funneh 8D
yeah.. ANYway, I love it XD But you should write more Boromir

Heya! Great story - I nearly fell from my chair laughing.XD Obsessive Boromir-fangurl waiting for more. ;)

Oh youll have more than Aragorn/Arwen shippers at your door my dear...*Evil grin...Brandishes Mithirl Spork of Doom(TM)... Whats with the Aragorn bashing? or am I just cranky cause the evil red fairy came to visit*pouts...Gimil is teh coolness...I love him, he soo totally freakin rocks... Of course most Sues just igonre him..poor guy..wait..thats a good thing..Anyway er.. I have nothing else to say cause...um...Im listening to er...Prokofiev's "Romeo and Juliet" 1st movment...*sighs...So umm...yeah...Keep thy characters in character and thou um shall not fall into the trap of the vile Mary Sue..*shudders...

Slayer,the completly obsessed fangirl

IMSGSET and Sue Squad member

P.S

IF you want to really make sure youre characters are not evil Mary Sues go here http: // alswaiter (dot) codedaemon (dot) com/ LOTR / lotrlt (dot) htm (just remove the dots and the spaces), Hannon le for the shout out..hehehehehe...and youre welcome luv..*grins

Great Story! Something was up with Chapter 3, wouldn't let me review for some reason. Try and update soon! It's been at least a couple months.

Interesting beginning!

That was funny! Can't wait for more! Maybe though you should find a way to make Legolas stop shooting everything that is kind of sad. First the phone now the laptop. What next? The game systems? Well I can't wait for more!

~Aimme

lol! Still a funny and amusing story...I like your style of writing, it's pretty good. A few grammer mistakes, but other than that...great! Keep updatingg...

lol! Still a funny and amusing story...I like your style of writing, it's pretty good. A few grammer mistakes, but other than that...great! Keep updatingg...

I like this story alot. It reminds me of my own friends...they're just like Trinh and Hayley. Funny stuff, and random too! You've got my attention!

The switching between characters back and forth is annoying. You haven't really given us a description of the characters besides which fellowship members they wanna kidnap. The inner monolouge of the characters doesnt progress the story, but holds it back from developing. Some of these parts are funny but just talking talking talking gets dull and actions can get more laughs then anything. Other than all this "I enjoy this story and would like to see it develope. Good effort!

wow...awesome story so far! really random, but I like it! good work, keep it up!

Pst... "dina" is Grelvish. If you go to my profile you'll find a bunch of links to trustworthy sources. I was just wandering through and noticed that.

Galu a teithad vain! (Good fortune and fair writing!)
Navaer Lalaith

Very random and crazy...But good. I am amazed. I have not read a fanfic that is random in which I don't get ticked off and stopped reading...I am not a Boromir or Legolas fan so this is quite amusing, these descriptions and the...never mind.

Mwahahahaha 2nd chapter! I can finally reply! *dances* Instead of having a reply filled with nonsense-I decided to reply to critiques! *dances again* WHY MUST I DANCE?!?!?! Okay, now, back on subject. Ahem.

->Well youre fic is really umm random..Funny but random..

I thrive on random-ness.

->First since you've clearly read the books

Oh, no. Lady Boromir has read the books. I watch the movies! Reading the books would actually mean I have patience and the ability to understand early 20th century literature. And I am none of those things. Sadly. No, not sadly. If I were those things people would expect more from me.

->you would know that Westron is not English, so you wouldnt be able to understand them and they wouldnt be able to understand you either.

Wow, I did not know that. How LotR-clueless I am. I don't know about Lady Boromir, but I would rather avoid that 'cause I'm too lazy to think of a reason. But since I can understand them in the movies, that's my excuse. *runs away before anyone can question me*

->What does dina mean?

From what I've heard, Dina = shut up in Quyena/Elven. Yeah, I totally butchered the spelling. O.o

->Thirdly, maybe you explained this but how old are your characters?

We mention it in later chapters, not the ones that are posted, but we're not so crazy that we don't have an outline. But from talking to Lady Boromir, we're 24. I wanted to be older, but she likes being young. And we graduated from college and are homeowners. AT 24! Can you say Daddy's money?!?! Lol. No, we have high paying jobs because in the world of fanfiction, we can do anything we want.

->And what do your characters look like?

I'm short. She's tall . . . we wear funny clothes . . . wow! Thanks for mentioning that! Now I can add in like, an entire chapter on Legolas describing me and telling me how beautful I am! MWAHAHAHA!

I'm just joking.

->Fourthly the Fellowship BAFAMing to the 21st century is probably the most cliched plot device known to man, its been done a thousand and one times, just like girls BAFAMing to Middle-Earth fics are a dime a dozen.

Oh, the only reason we picked that was because we were too lazy to write 395413249832 chapters on how they got there. >.< Shows how devoted we are, eh? Anyways, I can guarantee you that it's not going to be some crazy-not EVER IN A MILLION years-are you on crack? sort of thing. It was just a way for us to start everything.

->FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS A LEGLOMANCE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE THE PIT OF VOLES DOESNT NEED ANYMORE..AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT MAKE THEM TURN INTO ELVES OR FIND OUT THEYRE REALLY VANYARWENLLETHMELLONIVANFIENTOLORMORTHMANWE ARAGORNS 233,9,9,9TH SUE DAUGHTER AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *TAKES BREATH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP ALL OF THE CHARACTERS IN CHARACTER OKAY? NO BEEOTCH ARWEN NO ANGST!CUTTER!TEH EVOL EOYWN, NO RAPIST!DENETHOR! NO PEDAPHILE!ELROND! K? K?[gives back harry potters] capslock of doom]sorry about that...And one more thing, does the ring work in the 21st century?Explore that possibily...

If we ever did that, report us and hire a hitman to kill us, please. There's going to be, AT THE MOST, one romance. I know the beginning of our story is weird and crazy, but we're not so weird and crazy that we do that. I like being a human and living in the US and eating Rocky Road ice cream while listening to the Fray, thank you very much.

And Eowyn kicks @$$!

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Since I'm only allowed to write one "review" per chapter, all of my replies are going to be answering critiques. So I leave the spamming to Lady Boromir! Lol. Just kidding.

Last of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH for reviewing and reading the craziness. We really appreciate it. And critique us all you like!

Much love (for James Franco)!

Well youre fic is really umm random..Funny but random.. I like it.. But I will give you a few er suggestions so to speak:

First since you've clearly read the books(something I havent done yet, I mean I tried to read the Fellowship but I couldnt go past page 10*sighs pathetic I know..)you would know that Westron is not English, so you wouldnt be able to understand them and they wouldnt be able to understand you either. Unless youve somehow avoided that whole language thing which is fine, I just wanted to point that out.

Second again youve read the books, which again I have to give major props for, cause I couldnt get through.. What does dina mean? It sounds familar but i cant seem to place where I saw it..hm...Anyway I would double check that word to make sure its really evlish and not Grevlish, cause I made the mistake of using a site i thought was authentic only to find out later that it wasnt really elvish they were using.If it came from Arwen Undomdiel than its not elvish. If it came from the books, the council of elrond, or than its authentic. Im no Sindirin expert by any means, Im sure if I ever BAFAMED into Middle-Earth, I would be able to speak a few words here and there Valar willing that I ended up in one of the Evlen relms..Valar help me if I BAFAMED in rohan or one of dwarven relms...

Thirdly, maybe you explained this but how old are your characters? I dont think you mentioned that maybe you did..hm..anyway if they are underage(under 18 lets say) why are they home by themselves? Maybe its just me, but my parents would never EVER leave me home alone till I was much older..And what do your characters look like? Now Im not asking for four paragraphs describing every detail of their hair, eyes, clothes ect, that would be urple, something the LOTR fandom can do well without...But a general description would be fine. Remeber show dont tell..

Fourthly the Fellowship BAFAMing to the 21st century is probably the most cliched plot device known to man, its been done a thousand and one times, just like girls BAFAMing to Middle-Earth fics are a dime a dozen. I say this becaue you dont want your story to be like all the rest of them, make it unique, have some twist or something, make it your own(Valar Ive been watching WAY too much American Idol). I also see that Welcome to Rivendell Mr. Anderson is on your favs list, I love LOVE that fic. ahem..anyway..and more thing:

[borrows Harry Potters Capslock of doom] FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS A LEGLOMANCE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE THE PIT OF VOLES DOESNT NEED ANYMORE..AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT MAKE THEM TURN INTO ELVES OR FIND OUT THEYRE REALLY VANYARWENLLETHMELLONIVANFIENTOLORMORTHMANWE ARAGORNS 233,9,9,9TH SUE DAUGHTER AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *TAKES BREATH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP ALL OF THE CHARACTERS IN CHARACTER OKAY? NO BEEOTCH ARWEN NO ANGST!CUTTER!TEH EVOL EOYWN, NO RAPIST!DENETHOR! NO PEDAPHILE!ELROND! K? K?[gives back harry potters] capslock of doom]sorry about that...And one more thing, does the ring work in the 21st century?Explore that possibily...

Thus sayeth the Sue Slayer, er..yeah...

Slayer, the completly obsessed fangirl

IMSGSET and Sue Squad member