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Reviews For: Heartbeat

AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen 2008-06-02 ch 1,	abuseKawaii! Conan died... AND AI SAVED HIM! YAY! I'm very happy to say that I liked this fic very verwy Much! Poor Ai... Stupid Ran... Evil devil brat... Perfect coupe breaker Ran... Stupid two timing Shinichi/Conan! You know... now that I talked myself into it... I think Conan/Shinichi SHOULD have died... Hm... I'll think it over... Thanxs!
The Fate of an Amaryllis 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseI've gotta say... 'T is beyond magnificent. =D I love your play on emotions. It really strikes out to the reader. Definitely on Favorites. cheeky grin
Miyano Ran 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseI think the deeper meaning of what Conan was trying to say in the last line was 'you need more light and you shouldn't stay in the darkness.' Maybe Conan meant that Ai should be more cheerful and open up to people and finally see the light that she has been waiting for her whole life and leave the constant pain she experienced in the darkness. Is that what he meant? Sorry, I'm a sentimental person, I'm sure you can see that. There was a part where you said that Ai 'peak', it should have been 'peek'. Wrong spelling. 'Peak' is for peak of the mountain while the 'peek' that you mispelled that you are suposedly refering to is the peeping kind of peep. Am I right? I just wanna say that you are an awesome athour! I can really see that in your stories so never get tired of writing and Keep Up! It's a good thing conan lived, but, I think that it's impossible.
Ran-dezvous 2007-02-14 ch 1,	abuseI remember reading this eight and a half months ago, when I didn't have an account yet and was Detective Conan newbie. I throughly enjoyed reading it. But now, I enjoyed it even more--now that I know a little bit more about Ai. I really love this story! Ai and Conan were very much in character. The only thing I can nitpick was the use of the word 'oxygen' twice in this sentence: "He couldn't circulate oxygen if he wasn't breathing any oxygen."
Jophiel 2006-10-16 ch 1,	abuseAi cried! And she's in character! Sque! This is definitely one of those rare gems of good fanfiction. Keep writing!
CSMars 2006-10-14 ch 1,	abuseaww... i love ai! she's so cute!
Fredryck 2006-07-11 ch 1,	abuseNice work! I'm a bit sad because Conan doesn't love Ai back (or at least, it doesn't seem so) but the story was nice and well written. I hope to see you write more Conan/Ai stories!
Annitha 2006-05-25 ch 1,	abuseVery nice! It's writen really well and the characters' aren't OOC at all. I hope to read more of your works. Go on with the great work! Bye.
BlackMailer 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseaaw-haw...it was cute, but it needed just a leetle more! I love the AxC pairings, and you did a pretty good job! You did Ai well too, she wasn't OOC when thinking about Conan at all, like, it was too realistic! Keep it up, yo!
Paige D. Skye 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseI am no expert at writing, but I've read a darn lot and I really enjoyed your fic. It was beautifully written, keep writing.
RanMouri82 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseThis was wonderful. Conan, by the way, was very much in character, something many fanfic authors forget when writing about Ai's feelings for Conan. I also liked the somewhat vague ending. The part written in Agasa's POV distracts from the flow of the main plot, so it should be either revised to remain in Ai's POV or spread throughout the story. By the way, not many of us can even begin to understand Ai perfectly, so don't worry about it! But you've managed to tap into the complexity of her feelings, and that says a lot. Keep writing!

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