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WOW! I'm going to review this one before I move on to your other. WOW that was awesome! I can tell you put so much thought into that it's just amazing! And I do feel like somethings were repeated more then once, but it wasn't annoingly so it's the thoughts that would come up every time if I was in that postition of loosing a friend. This is really a well written and well thought out story. And it better then some published books that I have read over the years.

Wow, it's finished. Or has it only just begun? Amazing fic, looking forward to reading the sequel! With what i've said in earlier reviews, I can't wait to see what happens next. Great story.

in what chapter do they kiss BrightMikal

One of the many things I like is how you portray Dumbledore. He's not overly manipulative, rather more of a tactician. Whereas in other fics he's crazy, or omnipotent, in this one he seems more... natural. So it's easier to forgive him for scheming, and not hate him for it.

That being said, It is incredibly weird to think that we, the readers, are supporting Harry to fight in a war. He's only 16, and in the normal world he should be staying in school. It's only because of the prophecy that we think that in some twisted way he should fight. Great Chapter.

hey BrightMikal i like the way you talk

(I'm typing this as i'm reading, this time)

I've never really considered the effects of Ginny reliving her memories, and opening her eyes to see a black haired, good looking boy before her. Considering Harry and Tom do look the same, would she confuse them in that point of time? It's a worthy question.

The very idea of Ginny stealing the diary back for other reasons than self protection is a remarkable one, I've never read that before. The very idea that Ginny knew, and pretty much sacrificed herself, is a emotional one, and had Harry not got there in time, would definitely be a tear worthy moment, I think. (plot bunny attack! Damn you. :])

I quite like how you've built up Neville's character as well during this fic, and consquently Harry and Neville's friendship. It doesn't seem awkward, or rushed, as it can do in other fics, and you've given Neville plenty of dialogue which supports how Harry and Nev interact.

McGonagall's talk with Harry really underpins some of the reasons why people follow him in the books, and also shows their progress to becoming good friends.

Liked the reference to his parent's letters. It's a nice touch.

FINALLY. THE KISS! WHOOP! WHOOP! :]

The moment's romantic. Pretty good kiss scene, actually. Not too soppy, but not like a one liner 'and it was bliss'. Great!

You've got a great point about them being best friends. I keep trying to write a fic which they are (H/G) - and stay - Best friends, but everytime I try, it begins to veer in a romantic direction. I'm really not sure Harry and Ginny can be best friends and not fall in love.

I like how they're still comfortable with each other, even with the step up in the relationship. And how they're not spending all the time practising. ;]

Unique idea that they don't think of Marauder names. Or were you just indecisive? Either way, it's a very visible difference. Shows how Harry knows that while he may be realed to prankster and their legacy, he knows whats important.

Great battle scene with the invisible enemies! Definitely underused. With all the ways to 'blend' in the wizarding world, Death Eaters and Order members really like to stay visible sitting ducks, don't they? Oh, and I really liked the trap for Madame Bones! Very sneaky. Great Chapter!

The depth of this fic continues to astound me. The amount of thinking you have put into this, from the way they conduct Legilimency, to the character's feelings and internal monologues, turns this fic into the most detailed i've read. Though the fic may progress slowly for some, I believe the pace gives the reader time to really ... almost 'sink' into this world you've written. Fantastic.

*Sharpens the pitchforks* How could you end this chapter on such a ciffhanger! :P Just when Harry was realising his feelings too...
Great Chapter!

I keep wondering what will happen with Jessica. I'm guessing she'll be important later, either being found with Harry, or drawn into the magical world in some way. Only think is to read on i guess. Great Chapter!

And Ginny and Harry grow closer and closer... Can't wait for the spark that sets it all off! Great Chapter.

Your McGonagall is a lovely character in this fic, a very good mentor figure. Great Work!

Ouch, Harry's pulling no punches in this chapter. A great arguement scene here, In which you make Harry systematically challenge Ron, and get Ron to realise his behaviour. I think it's a great sequence. Oh, and Yay for H/G Fluff!

One thing your story really, really captures, is the transition from having Ron and Hermione as Best Friends, to Ginny, and making the reader really feel that change. From the glimpses of Harry's talks to Ginny, to Hermione and Ron's POVs, the reader really starts to understand the widening gap between the trio.

Unlike other fics, were Harry just seems to 'switch' in one or two chapters, the slow build up, or really underlying plot, all gravitates to this change. That's what I think makes this fic amazing, because it's that realisitic. In the real world, People don't just change their friends at the drop of a hat, but it's gradual seperation. And I think you write that perfectly.

Great Work!

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