You're a great writer, but you already knew that. That first line--I can really hear Alex using those words. I hate what they did to Serena Benson, so I'm glad you emphasize that she loved Olivia. And I think Olivia loved her, too, despite everything.

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Sad...
But Good - i loved the ending, the last four words. and the first sentence. Your writing hits to the core with me girly

hey i love that.It was tight & deep.Ill be looking forward for more stories...

-Nika