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| ComboBreaker 2008-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseEh i couldn't get into it. An OC as the team leader and the Hokage telling Sakura and Ino about the kyuubi... |
| Julius E. Tobias 2008-09-20 ch 19, | abuseAwesome can't wait for the next part |
| Chuni Luni 2008-08-16 ch 19, | abuseAwesome story! Now I'm debating on wheather or not to start reading the second part of this right now considering how late it is...ugh I dunno! Well you can be sure that I will end up reading it. If not now then very soon. Please keep up the good work and take care! |
| Kensei Takezo 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuse... |
| Chuni Luni 2008-07-29 ch 6, | abuseWow I really like this! :) I wanna read more right now but it's really late and I'm so tiered...(Sigh) Oh well I'll come back when I can and finish this up. Take care! |
| Valheru1988 2008-07-23 ch 6, | abusewas reading the chapter and where someone said rasengan was a wind jutsu. the first part isn;t, but with naruto being a wind type in the manga he makes the rasengan more powerful by adding the wind element into it, it was made to become a wind type, but the 4th hadn't managed to do it before he died. |
| Salmiska 2008-07-20 ch 15, | abuseNarutos dad was the forth hokage but his name was Minato Namikaze and his mother was ninja from another village and her name vas Kushina Uzumaki i tought you should know |
| izetta-chan 2008-07-13 ch 2, anon. | abusenot to shabby! i liked it alot because it has a good story line but i think it needs more romance in it *cough* narusaku *cough* who said that? lol |
| count down til death 3. 2. ... 2008-06-25 ch 10, | abusei have loved this fic up until now now. now i am ** because tenshi is blind. Y? he didn't deserve that! other than that i find this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read and because it has ben good i shall continue reading it. |
| Nebula1701 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abusegreat story... just one thing why would a store owner who hates the kyuubi sell cloths that has the kyuubi on it? |
| fallensong 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseyour right, rasengan, isn't any type of element, its only chakra control taken to the extram, and if your good enough you can add a element to rasengan...even though kikashi can't (and yes he knows resangan, in the manga at least) |
| Freeze62 2008-03-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseRasengan is not a wind jutsu but naruto makes a wind form called the fuuton shuriken later on, after shippuuden |
| Officer Dibble 2008-03-25 ch 19, | abusewow i luved this story it was awesome. i really hope u either have or wi do a sequel. ja na |
| Gai Bureze 2008-03-24 ch 4, | abusewell... I've read up to this point and I'm loving the story so far. I will continue to read on... later... 6am, I need at least SOME sleep... maybe... like, half an hour... -_-;; I put the blame on you and your fanfiction-creating brethren! |
| Shikamaru's babygirl 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseNice, the explanation about the meditation was excelent. They improve so fast, but you put a good reason to it. In most cases, if you don't put a good explanation as if to why they got so good so fast, people might say that you're rushing things. You do good, no wait, awesome work. Keep it up. |