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Sita 900 2007-01-13 ch 1,	abuseaw, happy endings :)I really like this one... Very beautiful, esp since it didn't have dialog. the more 'thought' like approach worked very well here. Great work
A bunch of lying bananas 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseSpell-binding - I was hooked the entire time. This was amazing writing and I can't even begin to describe my emotional stability right now.
HeoandReo 2006-06-11 ch 1,	abuseWow. What an excellent story. It retells the story of Final Fantasy 4 in a way that makes sense, and with an acceptable twist. I can easily imagine Kain and Rydia like the way your story says. Even though it's not my favourite coupling, and my favourite couplings are more bizarre, this story still shows that this pairing makes sense, and is good and possible. In short, I love this story.
Lassarina Aoibhell 2006-06-03 ch 1,	abuseVery nice! I like this very much. It definitely has the yearning feeling I get from the game of Kain always wanting what he cannot have, and the happy fluffy moment at the end is excellent.
Freida Right 2006-06-03 ch 1,	abuseHm... This was sweet, but, personally, I prefer to think of Rydia going with Edge. In my head there was a love-triange between Cecil, Kain, and Rosa, but it's slowly faded. Kain seems like a loner to me. But, then again, I've never actually beaten the game: I've been through the final battle a few times (and watched my little brother try to struggle through it), but we can't beat the dude... I can't remeber if it was Zemus or Zeromus. Oh well, you know what I mean (I think...).
Menolly 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseVery well written. Way to go! ;) ~Menolly
Captured Moon 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseVery cute. I thought this was prefect for a short story. I've said it before and I'll say it again. You're brilliant. I'll read your material anyday. Good job!

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