This was so cute! Great job!

kool as mate! cute as i like ... alot

u will now find this on my favourites list ^_^

That was good, but I can't help but think that Tifa was slipping everyone Date Rape drugs if she was tellin him not to ask what was in it '>_> =]

Great story! You have alot of talent. However, I suggest that you find yourself a beta of some sort (or do it yourself) to edit and comb through your story. There's alot of good things in here, but I was only barely able to get past all the spelling, grammar, punctuation, and syntax errors to enjoy the story.

Otherwise, good job!

I LOVE YOU !

...Aw. T.T I wish I had your kick ** writin' skillz. T.T

I love this couple to death. And it's much appreciated you decided to write a toally awesome one-shot!

Latteer

..I liked it, it was sweet and in a way innocent.

your story rocks! Very cute indeed. Please continue to write more.

I just wanted to let you know that this story of your's inspired me to write my own Reno/Cloud story...it's a sweet pairing, I think...^_^

CloudxReno is like my new OTP. ^_^!

oh please, please,please write a rufus x yuffie.
i love that pairing