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| Butterfly's Shadow 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI have to admit that was beautiful, if I could cry easily I probably would have. It was amazingly described it's like every one of your descriptions was like a new piece of the way I saw the puzzle of your story was revealed. I loved it to death. A beautiful job, done well! |
| Angelic Gargoyle Artemis 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was really depressing, but very beautifully done. |
| Jamie 2007-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere are no words. Maybe there are but I'm afraid that the words I might use will not be able to serve their real purpose. Words... feelings... It's a beautiful sadness. I loved it. |
| Aneirin 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abusegood story. depressing though. on an odd note, the end of this story goes well with 'savin me' by nickleback. |
| NetGurl 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseIt made me cry. You definetly have a way with words. |
| Spirit of Vengeance 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was painful, but in a GOOD way. I really enjoyed this story. |
| K005 2006-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseGod I loved this one better then all the other ZAGR fics. You used such great detail and nobody else has noticed (or nobody I know) that people ARE mostly water and it wouldn't exactly work between Zim and Gaz. This is deffinetally like those disney movies that needs to stay a 1 chapter thing and not go onto some crappy sequel that will make people hate you x.x. (yeah, I'm wierd, but its true most disney movies NEED to stay as 1 movie! 2 movies would just KILL whatever little magic they made...same goes for The Ring.) Lemme point out how your probably the first one to keep zim short and point out thier 'immortality'. RAMBLING ENDS NOW. |
| RavenNevermore18 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Just beautiful. I nearly cried I really did. I loved the format you used to, just so lovely, so sad... |
| SpeakingThroughWrittenWords 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI am not a huge Gaz and Zim fan, but this story has definetly changed my mind. I hate having to read about a character dieing (unless I hate that person), but as it all made so much sense, all I could do was stare in misery as I enjoyed a good story. Enough words, and I thank you for time definetly well spent. |
| Crossover Fiend 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseDespite the gross deviations of character, the use of angst that has little place in the series and the death after death after death, I cannot be prevented from praising this story. The way that the story was organised by twisting it from end to beginning and then back to the end was fantastic in and of itself, complemented by the intricate grasp of the English language and the deep and often tear-jerking moments of epiphany and introspection. But the greatest point, however, is definitely the parallel that was drawn between the rigidly, almost insanely structured society of the Irkens, and the aimless, almost chaotic wanderings of the humans. That was what sold it for me. |
| Rain the Revenant 2006-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseIncredible. Absolutely stunning. Everyone was in chracter and all the canon rules were followed, yet you still manage a serious, emotional, part-romance-part-religion fic. If there was a pulitzer prize for fanfics, this would get it. Seriously. |
| PaperThinWalls 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI’ve got to say your writing style is wonderfully done. You keep it detailed but don’t dwell long enough to the point of boredom. I might just take you up on that beta reading offer too. Take care. |
| Betryal 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, I'm so bad at reviews. I loved it. Each memory flowed together creating a beautiful chain of sorrowful memories. Zim's memories even hurt me to imagine. It's sad, he chose to stay away to give her a better life and she still loved him. I do believe that Zim could die of of overexpoxsure to water. Great Job, I'm adding you to my favorites! |
| Linzy 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written, almost lyrical. I like. |
| Chixicluub 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI cried again. Why do these Zim stories make me so sad? No other kinds of fics make me sad, but this is the second one to make me cry. You people are too good at what you do... ;_; |