 The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom 2006-05-24 . chapter 1Have you ever felt like some Reno fics feel like Sin City? Well, this one makes me feel that. In a good way. It's interesting how some Reno fics are light-hearted and others are dark.
Anyway, I really love your imagery in here, and it set the tone very well. You capture his dangerousness nicely too. I like how the guy Reno kills was drinking whisky, and then how Reno takes a swig of some whisky later when he returns home. And I've never seen Reno's hair compared to blood, so I found that interesting. Anyway, it's a neat little fic. Gritty and a bit sad, but it's very well done. |
 loveme731 has returned 2006-05-24 . chapter 1Reno can fight. Enough said. Try to put claimership thingys at the beginning. The story was awsome and very detailed. Nothing else I can say except for that. Reno is probably one of my favorite characters, after Cloudie, Zack, and Vincent. I'm sure the bookmark was awsome. Keep up the good work! |