Damn it. The problem with reading very good stories that they compell you to review them and say something slightly useful about them, which is a problem if you've got very little by way of useful. I'm afraid I haven't the skill to critique this beautiful brain-baby of brilliance that is Reverberations.

Psychoanalytical is my favorite brand of angst and the fact you've made me give a legitimate care about Akimichi Chouji (of all people) suggests a hellava lotta skill. He's not a character I seek to read and yet, you've made him interesting and totally beleivable as the long-lost Konoha genin gone Oto. It's very cool and original as hell to boot. No one ever goes out of their way to kidnap Chouji and torture him. You did. Thus, you have my props.

Also, you have love for not writing like a retard and revitalizing my faith in the use of proper grammar, punctuation, and using some creative bloody sentence structure. God bless you.

Otogakure mind-fuck is by far the best. I pity poor Chouji, but secretly want for the dirty details. You'll have all 's sadists come out the woodwork to take a peek. I love that hostile hostage situation that makes victims go over to the other side. It's hard to do beleivably (I gave up on doing it beleivably, point of fact.) but you do anyway. Cheers!

Your Shika-Chouji dynamic is thoroughly engaging and, as I'm sure you were aiming for, the glue that holds this fic together emotionally. Catharsis out the ass. God! Two best friends mutually thinking the other long-dead? Anyone who is unmoved by this can bite me. I may not be a fan of the Shika/Chou pairing by any means, but screw it. I fav what's clever and this story is clever.

Thought you should know, in detail. You deserve it.

PS: This is my way of saying, 'ZOMG! I luvet! update pleeze?'

(is too lazy to log in) so what's it gonna take to make you update this bad boy, huh?

This is really different, I really like it. You're quite a talented writer. Keep up the good work, I look forward to further updates.

OMG! haha i was just skimming though fics and i was reading teh pairings and your ino anyting wiht legs just cracked me up...ha it was wonderful

please update im loving this

fuck. Update soon please...

*loves the story*

Aw, this makes my heart ache... poor Shika and Chouji. Damn, so upset when I realised there wasn't another chapter to read yet, so please update soon. I think you've done a fantastic job.
Oh and just a quick question, did Chouza (is that spelt right..?) die?

Holy crap, this is the first fic I've read on this site in ages that made me want to write a review. This AU you've created really intrigues me; if you don't plan to post a part three (since it has been a year) would you please, please email me some kind of summation of what was supposed to come next so I can have closure on this tale?

i want cookies!! and this story is awesome! i love the ino-shika-cho relationship!

So cool but I don't know really know what to say. Now stop telling me to review and let me read! :P

O dun dun dun!

That's just so great.Please update this wonderfull story.
I like your idea very much, so please go on writing.

cookies!

oh so sad and happy at the same time...pls post da nxt chappy soon

^_^ slaughtergirl

ZOMG this is wonderful! Your InoShikaCho stuff is all amazing but this just totally takes the cake. They're all so... so well developed and three dimensional and yet in character and... This should be the plot to Naruto. Hands down.

Are you planning on continuing this thing? Because I'm really interested.