Aw that was so good!! Well done!! I really loved this story!! Congratulations!

very cool

cool

cool but this general guy is kinda of cool having a cure for vampires (i hope i got that right)

It's been a pleasure reading this story, and the Lilah reference at the end was necessary. this was an amazing story, very fun and interesting to read. I'll definitely read your new fic about Hannah's childhood.
Mia.

It's a fascinating story, and Wesley's so great. You write Wesley so good, so protective, so caring, so Wesley.
And that story about Hannah's childhood must be interesting, I'd love to read it. Maybe to find out how Wes and Lilah handled their slayer child..

Hannah's turning out to be an amazing character, I love her! great story.

Good chapter! I love how you gave a bit of a new twist to the story after people probably thought it was over when Hannah killed the general. I hope everyone will be okay after this many-vampire fight! I'm also looking forward to read that story about Hannah's childhood, I hope you update it soon!
Just a tip: You have lots of dialogue, you might want to describe some more feelings, or perhaps details inbetween? Keep writing!

Excellent chapter, this story is going very well. It's fascinating and your writing's amazing!
Mia.

I love this story, great chapter, I love Willow too!

YAy!! I'm so glad Hannah's feeling better now! Cute that you brought Willow in, too! Btw it's Rosenberg instead of Rosenburg, I think. :P

Hey! Great chapter! I really loved the Spike & Angel at the bar thingy bit! That was funny! Again, poor Hannah and grr Lilah, though I'm still sure she has her reasons for being the way she is. There are still some spelling mistakes and stuf, possibly a beta reader would help? I can do that, if you want. Just IM me if you need me (Y).
xx-

That was a great chapter, I enjoyed it so much, please please keep writing the next chapter.. (:
Mia.

cool

Great idea.. I like it.. Can't wait fro more. :)