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| Herr Doktor 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad, but I'm mainly reviewing because I have not heard from Hilton since May and need his current email. Still a good story, though. |
| natasha 2007-09-07 ch 8, anon. | abusefor your first time writing something good job write more plz |
| LeFrenchMartini 2007-08-31 ch 8, | abuseHmm, odd, judging by youre tiny little authour notes i`m guess youre not going to update any time soon right? I like this story :) Would you mind returning the favour and R & R my new story called When a Tales Come a Knockin' or any others.. Thanks `& Shayy ; |
| DarkInkWriter 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abusePlease update!! |
| Allyria816 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseDude, i am in love with this story i can not wait to find out what happend with everone and what Sora does. update soon! |
| DarkInkWriter 2007-06-25 ch 8, | abuseI just started reading your story and I really like it so far. I am awaiting the next chapter with great anticipation. Kudos!! |
| vampgurl125 2007-06-16 ch 8, | abuseI LIKE THIS STORY!! IT VERY VERY NICE! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! I WONDER WHAT HAPPEND TO SEBA (WERE HE IS)..AND ZANE..AND SORA?? AND HER FATHER.. |
| Bob Zox 2007-06-15 ch 8, | abuseAw, no flames from me, I thought it was good. The only thing is at the beginning of some of the sentences you forgot to capitalize. But the chapter overall was good. Keep writing Kat! ^_^ |
| galadriel-nz 2007-02-04 ch 7, | abuseThis is a good story. If i could make a suggestion, have you tried writing plays? it's just, ur script's really good even where the text itself is a little shaky (which u admit it is in places in ur notes :) ) just a thought anyway, cant wait to read next chapter. |
| centra228 2007-01-25 ch 7, | abusecool plz go on |
| Hilton Airall 2006-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, it's me again. I e-mailed you in October. I have a new e-mail adress now. I'm going to read your storie now. |
| Bob Zox 2006-12-21 ch 7, | abuseWell, two months later and you update another chappie! ^_^ About time! :) Haha! Hi ya Kat, I was so glad to see you are still writing! Keep it going, we all love ya bunches! Still been praying for your friend every morning. I am still writing too, but just not here, but now that I see you are, well then I have to now also, stay tuned! Well, kewl story, update soon! |
| centra228 2006-10-16 ch 6, | abusepretty good u seemed a little off edge with the writing tho |
| Saakina Shambe 2006-10-15 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey! Wanted to complement you on your story! I think its brave too put a piece of your personal work on the internet! You've inspired me to do so myself! I have written 3 un finished versions of my vamp. book,"A Fate of Heart" I commend you, and keep writing! ;D |
| Hilton Airall 2006-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey. I've been in Cinncinnati for half the week. I'm begging you-UPDATE YOUR STORY! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS! [crying] OH... Anyway... keep up the vampires! |