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| DaseyFreak 2008-10-01 ch 1,  | abuseOMG!! That is so sweet of him!! Wow! You did a great job writing that! |
| blackm00n5 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusethe only thing i don't get is that they're step siblings, does that effect it at all? It's a very well written story though. |
| princetongirl 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseloved it update soon |
| samantha 2007-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseprfct not to fast not to slow |
| BeautifulxxDisasterx 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseIt was good. I really like the writing and the plotline. -Lani |
| hailey 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abusethe story was not rushed at all. i liked it. |
| DaRkDrEaMeR23 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseo so awesomeness!! loved it! |
| Professional-Pain-In-The-As... 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abusei loved it it was so so sweet |
| TVHollywoodDiva 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abusegreat story |
| RachelKarenGeller 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abusegood you did well not to rush it |
| Mrs. Flame Alchemist Wannab... 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseit was god! very good...who one that contest btw?great story! |
| smi1e 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseIt was cute. : D ♥ |
| dragonchaser8917 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseit was good and since it was only a one shot it wasn't 2 fast please keep writing lovin this story so far |
| blondishbrownish 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abusewow. i love how you did Derek. That was amazing. you showed how boys (i dont know this for sure, me being a girl and all) try to act tough and guy-ly. but they have a soft side too. they really know how to be gentle and kind and comforting. amazing job. I want more of this softness, this simple emotion... wonderful job. |
| Hopelessly-Romantic22 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was very cute. I wish you would have continued the story some more. Maybe some more chapters or something. Overall it was very nice. |