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Reviews For: Disappearing Act

razmataz13drums
2007-11-09
ch 2,
abuseif she was that upset that she had to go then she wouldnt have gotten over it that quikly
hug-me
2007-10-28
ch 2,
abusei felt that this last part was a bit rushed but i'm glad you updated! it is nice to see some inside thoughts to Kerry! Maybe if you had time you could expand a bit on the storyline and add some more description! thanks for posting!
hug-me
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great start! i really hope you continue!
starshollow108
2006-08-27
ch 1,
abusegreat start! i'd like to see where you're taking this.
quack-duck
2006-08-15
ch 1,
abusereally well done.
great story.
natmp
2006-07-04
ch 1,
abuseout of all the ones i read. this was well the best one that kept me from getting halfway down the page and then going to another story. i like this one. and well yea, i want to know what happens. are you going to continue to write it?.
Emily
2006-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it! All the chracters are totally in character(lol that was weird). Please post more soon!
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