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| razmataz13drums 2007-11-09 ch 2, | abuseif she was that upset that she had to go then she wouldnt have gotten over it that quikly |
| hug-me 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abusei felt that this last part was a bit rushed but i'm glad you updated! it is nice to see some inside thoughts to Kerry! Maybe if you had time you could expand a bit on the storyline and add some more description! thanks for posting! |
| hug-me 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great start! i really hope you continue! |
| starshollow108 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abusegreat start! i'd like to see where you're taking this. |
| quack-duck 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abusereally well done. great story. |
| natmp 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseout of all the ones i read. this was well the best one that kept me from getting halfway down the page and then going to another story. i like this one. and well yea, i want to know what happens. are you going to continue to write it?. |
| Emily 2006-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! All the chracters are totally in character(lol that was weird). Please post more soon! |