My OC's name also Is Keira!
That's so COOL!!
Oh,and the story rules!

I find it amusing that both Elizabeth and "Keira" as it were, are in this at the same time

omg, omg i have spent all morning reading this and it is incedible! I love this story! wow! very good story!

awesome story

i luv this, this was very well written!

~Jack Sparrow's Pirate Chick~

for yer (?) at the top part, its something like 'wit the Pearl you could capture a demon and set free a father's soul'

i really enjoyed this fic, it kept me interested throughout, the only thing i would say is that, while Keira is quite fierce and pretty cool at the start, when her and jack's relationship develops, i feel she loses that a bit and doesn't remain as strong as her personality suggests at the start, but other than that it was a good fic, well written, well done!

Keira moved closer to Norrington, hoping to lead him on. She looked up at him seductively, her lips inches from his. He opened his mouth and she grinned, leaning even closer as he hovered over her, “I’m sorry Commodore, but according to law I can’t really touch you until marriage,” she pulled away, amusement dancing in her eyes at his disappointment.
^^ 2nd best moment in this fanfiction.. LOve IT!

That's *sniffle* so sweet

Loved the story and I plan on checking out the forum and the sequel! ^.^

I love your story! Already waiting for the sequel...

Great job. I can't wait til your sequel.

Aw!
Perfect ending!
Post the sequal ASAP!
~PofSW~

Ya! Sequel!

I think it's a very fitting ending. You have provided enough closure for me to be ok with it, and left enough opening for a sequel (which I dearly hope you begin soon). Jack is so cute when he's being sentimental!