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| Brother Dear 2006-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, forgive me, I'm probably the last person on earth who should be reviewing a poem. I thought the transitions were a little choppy in the beginning, but then again, I'm pretty sure most poems make me think that anyway... It definitely seems to convey the right feeling. I can't say I fully understand it, but what I really like is that throughout the whole poem, everything is something, like, you know what everything /is/. And then at the end, there's something you can't define. You know, this idea sparked from this, that if you made "this is this" into "This is this" Then you are also saying what is, as in, what is existing. But I wonder if that wouldn't make the poem too long... or maybe that might make it choppy. >_< Haha, it was just a thought. -Brother Dear (aka Erika. Remember me, sis? ^-^) |
| Wala 2006-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseHey Sapphire Lupe! Even though I'm not Christian, I liked the poem, I thought it was really good. Keep writing, I'll be waiting for your next chapter(s) in your stories. |
| Yami of Megami 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abusethis is good! hello! not_caring here! ^_^ i can get banned from doing script form? that is...weird...i think i will keep it though i havent had any complaints about it so far and it is the only way i can keep it going ^_^ considering that you are cristian you may not like Yaoi right? that is ok Yaoi is gay people just so you know...yeah i can see your face now! lol ^_^ |
| Jaden 2006-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good! But kinda dark and creepy sounding... Keep up the good work! (cheese tastes good!) |
| GIGGLE WOMAN 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abusevery good poem |