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| SaulaLove 2008-06-12 ch 11,  | abuseYou know whats really creepy? “I can feel your heart beating.” Sandra Bullock said the same thing to Julian McMahon in Premonition. The exact same thing. Thats so cool. |
| Christine Ruud 2008-06-06 ch 11, | abuseNow THAT is how the show should have gone. Thank you for writing it. I loved how you wrote Paige...very true-to-form. |
| Ginaaaa 2008-01-28 ch 11, | abuseaww, I loved it. You did a really good job, Phoebe and Cole are my favorite. |
| allison lightning 2008-01-21 ch 11, | abuseIt was a Phoebe/Cole story so I get Billie's semi role. Another person gets how ick the whole love line Phoebe uses in Forever Charmed- posessed by the source... Billie is one of my favourite one season characters right behind Chris. Forever Cole Phoebe! |
| Sherryn1 2007-12-31 ch 11, | abuseTHAT WUZ PERFECT! i wuz starting 2 notice alot of ur stories r similiar, but the ending on this one is WAY beta, i started crying! it's so sweet, such a bummer it didnt turn out this way. i didn't mind the 'i didn't know luv til coop' as much as i hate his name. in season 3 it said dat her true luv's name starts w/ C, so couldn't cupid b called sumthing like Bob (random), and hav cole stay her true luv, even if they cant b 2gther? that would b fine. anyway, i really luv ur work, one little change, i wouldnt hav them name their daughter pruedence, as sweet as it is, i personally don't like the name, but otherwise, i couldn't hav done beta. wow, dat wz a long review! keep writing! |
| ellie935 2007-11-28 ch 11, | abuseOMG!That was so good! please make more like this! |
| qtgirl 2007-09-09 ch 11, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this story! I was always a Phoebe and Cole fan. You made their journey in this story a sweet one. Its good that they both took responsibility for the first failed relationship. That really needed to be aired out.And of course we all love a happy ending! Good job. |
| MelindaTurner 2007-08-22 ch 9, | abuseYou know, this line was in Premonition, which also starred julian mcmahon. Laying her head on his chest, she smiled, “I can feel your heart beating.” funny huh? |
| Mrs. Quincy 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseIT ROCKED~ |
| CarolinElizabeth 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI absolutly loved it! That is your first charmed story? I just got a fanfiction account yesterday and I made mine yesterday. Yours makes mine look bad, I absolutly love it! You did a great job! I am gonna add this story to my favorites list! Keep it up! |
| Blue eyes6 2007-04-20 ch 4, | abuseAnother great chapter. I loved that Piper seemed to know Phoebe's feelings better than she did. So, now Paige knows that Cole still exists. But can they still be together? |
| Blue eyes6 2007-04-20 ch 3, | abuseI kind of feel sorry for Coop, but I always wanted Cole and Phoeeb to get back together. To me, they'll always be soul mates. Another great, but sad chapter. Sorry it took me so long to find this story. |
| Blue eyes6 2007-04-20 ch 2, | abuseWow! THat was some great chapter. I loved that Coop talked about Cole, without malace. But Victor has such hate for Cole. (Understandably) |
| Blue eyes6 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWas it Cole she really saw? I hope so. |
| Wicked R 2006-11-11 ch 10, | abuseI like the humorous touch |