its sad... good, but sad...

Especially that he realizes so late that she IS growing...

wow...

So good! I envy you.

Aww it's so sad, she could have been happy, granted in another few hundred years. Still she didn't know that all she knew was that she was mature woman with her own desires trapped in the body of a young girl. I never thought of things this way, but it does make sense! What an unique perspective, way to go!

This was a very cool story, and it isn't very often that you'll find Inu-Yasha stories with such depth. I especially liked the whole immortality theme as I have always found the concept to be interesting. Just a suggestion but you could write a fic about Inu-Yasha surviving into the modern age.

this was an interesting idea and the story certainly worked. I just don't like that they both had to die...but that's b/c I like happy endings.

Well, admit that i feel neither please or happy after reading this story. However, is't very unique and strange. And if you wanna impress the reader through the way it go, i think you could be proud. Both the ideas and the solving of problem are done quite well. It's just because of the angst in this fic made me somehow afraid ( or that's me who want to deny anything might be wrong or bad to my fav couple T_T ).

Sorry about the complex felling. >__