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| SyberWolfs 2007-10-13 ch 13, | abuseGreat story Abit funny to with the preacher's look that says "If you dare object I'll escort you to hell myself" XD keep writing -SyberWolfs- |
| Rury-chan 2007-06-04 ch 13, anon. | abuseI love it. It was cute at the end...and middle...and bennig. OK OK it was all cute all of it. the only promble was the form of the story. It was too block like. It need to sprad out some. There was a time or two I couldn't found my place. OH yeah I forgot the ch. where you were waching the last two eps. of D.N.Angle it was still very good. And if I was waching them my self I'll wounld get stuck on it and not wright at all. It was good. So keep on wrighing! XD |
| packardball 2006-12-08 ch 13, | abusepersonally i think you made the chapter to short and not enfoe time on chariter personally but other thank that great job it was still an asome story |
| CovertLeader 2006-10-08 ch 13, | abuseso cute! |
| ayame bunny 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseWHOA SO COOL! |
| Tae Acoma 2006-08-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseisn;t whoop-d-doo spelled with two 'e's after the 'd'? oh well. evil risa! |
| I am a band geek here me ro... 2006-08-14 ch 13, | abuseKawaii~ I loved it! Only, Emiko would most likely trick Daisuke into this wedding and such, Kosuke's the voice of reason in that relationship. Emiko usually fored Daisuke into the Dark-and-stealing thing. Even after Kosuke arrived. other than that, great fiction! |
| of wonderlands and alices. 2006-07-20 ch 13, | abuseAww, how kyute! LOL, the part with the preacher repeating his words for the third time was hilarious! [“NOW do we have any objections?" he asked giving a look to the crowd that said, if you dare object I’ll escort you to hell myself.] Oh my, what a violent preacher, hahaha! This was such a cute story, romantic, and I loved Emiko's character, she roxz out loud! Great job, I enjoyed reading it! =D |
| of wonderlands and alices. 2006-07-20 ch 8, | abuse...omgee, would Emiko really kill Kosuke for Daisuke's happiness? Wait, actually, when you put it that way...heck, I would! Wow, what an awesome mom (like mine, fwa ha ha). I hope everything works out in the end for Daisuke and Riku! =) |
| of wonderlands and alices. 2006-07-20 ch 6, | abuse[Why did he feel he had to tell her this when there was nothing special between them?] AW, how cute! I love that line, it was soo, I dunno. Romantic, I guess. =3 |
| of wonderlands and alices. 2006-07-20 ch 2, | abuseOoh interesting. My, my, evil Risa! I'll continue reading, haha. xD |
| PureKatPrincess 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseHey! This is a really cool story!! But, the scrunched up paragraphs scare me alittle to read but I still love it!! |
| cookiemania789 2006-05-28 ch 13, | abuseLin: What it's done? Kay: Didn't you read? It says 'End'. Lin: But...But! Kay: Shush! Aren't you glad Riku and Daisuke got maried? Lin: Well yeah... Kay: Then that settles it!. We really enjoyed your story Lin: And you update super fast!! Kay: Are you planning for a sequel? Lin: Yeah, yeah! Are you? Are you? I'd really read it if there is!! Kay: Good job! We highly praise you for the hard work and time you took for us to be happy Lin: Don't mind her she's just gonna blab all day long. Believe me it's not pretty. But on the other hand I agree with her. Good luck on the next fanfic you'll be making!! |
| cookiemania789 2006-05-26 ch 8, | abuseLin: As I said before, Man you're quick! Kay: But nontheless your story is very good. I hope you update soon. Lin: Yep! Or else Kay here will have nothing to do but torture me!! |
| cookiemania789 2006-05-25 ch 7, | abuseLin: Man you work fast! Kay: I agree. Lin: Keep on continuing it. As I said before I'm lovi'n it Kay: As do I |