I loved this story, but I have a problem. It is a trilogy, I read the last two but the first, Dragon's Wing (I think), has disappeared. It is not on your site listing the stories you wrote. Where is it? I would really like to read it.

"It says that Dragon's are lucky, little goddess."
You know what, you always end with the best lines possible! I actually think that the last sentence for this whole trilogy was a bit vague and definitely not direct to the point but I must say, you could not have ended it in a better way. It was perfect. I still don't know whether the pregnancy test came out positive or not but I can infer that it's a possibility that she's pregnant judging by Van's last line...or maybe I'm wrong. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this amazing trilogy and I must commend you on always having these original, crazy and wild ideas! In my opinion, it's good that you have never fallen into one of those cliche traps. You always maintain the originality and oddness of every story that you write.

I'm impressed with Dryden. A yacht!? Now that's luxurious! Anyways, I am aware of the fact that I only have one more chapter to read. I must say that you're gradually putting a closure to everything. The last words of Van in this chapter were so heartfelt as well and full of emotions.

I can't believe that Van forgave him in that way. I mean, I've expected Van to actually have a change of heart at one point in time in the story but I never really imagined that he would manifest his forgiveness through a song. Very clever idea!

I never really expected for Chid to really be Mamoru...That reallys surprised me.

Dryden's past was definitely a very funny story. I loved hearing all about it. Anyways, I'll continue reading on tomorrow. I've got to sleep now.

You really got into the heads of the characters in this chapter. I love the fact that you always try to explain the events happening and their thoughts through the dialogues instead of through a simple and monotonous explanation.

So The Sun God was the judgement card. I really didn't see that coming and it was such a huge revelation for me.

I was right. The Sun God is Chid. I'm also glad that Dryden's back because his character always provides comic relief.

Van can really talk a lot when he wants too...I think the title for this chapter is really appropriate for him.

Dornkirk the Russian mob boss rocks! He really is one hell of a devil. I know it's weird but I have a fascination for villains.

This is definitely a good chapter and the lyrics of the song you chose was great. I totally love your original ideas and how Folken used the power of his song in order to have the capacity to fight the fake Van. I can't wait to see what Van's reaction will be to what Hitomi has done.

A corset and handcuffs!? This chapter was hilarious!

So Allen really does have genuine feelings for Marlene? I didn't expect that.

Dilandau's awesomely twisted! Damn, he's insane and totally obsessive over Celena! As usual, I definitely love how you portray his character.