OMFG . . .
this is probably the *best* Bleach fan fiction I had ever read, in a very long time!

so . . .as you 100th reviewer, I must commend you on a job well done :). Are you an author in real life or something? This is a really good piece!

100 out of 5

love it! sorry i didn't review until now. i got caught up in the story ^-^'

OMG the muses are so evil >_< also YOU GOT TO SEE HITSU'S JAP VA PREFORM!! NO FAIR!

Oh how fun *goes to next chapter*

My dear friend, I do believe you write action something impressive. <3

You really had me hanging on every word, and the idea of Hitsu's gigai getting mauled by children is one to savor and share. (I had to stop and laugh.) I did read it originally as that it was getting mauled by them, however--like the children were just agents of the hollows. I was wrong though, there...so maybe a clarification might help? It could just be me, too. It happens. f9,9?

I REALLY like the little notes about the gigai at the beginning. The themes of "stop polluting earth kthx" are refreshing in the sense that they are so common in Japanese works, but so lacking in fanfic, usually. Always a little plug for the earth is nice, especially through that helpful lens of "And I should know" spiritual being. That really helped remind the reader (cough, me) that Hitsu is a spirit from elsewhere, not just a completely human character doing something extraordinary. Good work there, for real. ^__^

(I also just love the idea of Hitsugaya with allergies or asthma or something. Something that is an unexpected consequence of being in a world where you don't belong, making you appear as weak as the people around you tend to think you should be... It's really thought-provoking, especially in reference to the stuff in the previous paragraph of this review. A nice touch, honestly.)

Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work; you've definitely got a future ahead of you! Oh, and before I forget: There was no Japanese! Thank whatever you believe in, becaues that makes me exceedingly happy. And lol, rangiku. x3 woot.

Great story I liked it a lot. Please continue it so I can know what happened with those hollow parasite type. The plot is very good and has a lot to give, it would be great if you can continue the story. Hope you understand what I mean.
P.S. Sorry for the bad English. I speak Spanish.

One word... awesome.

Nice story^^
I'm surely going to read the sequel^^
Mmh, nothing more left to say, I don't know what to criticize, so it's perfect will have to do it ;)
Keep up the good work =)

Wow... that was amazing. Loved all the fight scenes and well everything. Poor Shirou- chan. After all that whumping he still had to drink that vile drink. So bravo and awesome job *applauds* but you should really consider making a sequel. XD

Interesting, very interesting, this is a very well done work and I very much enjoyed reading it! Thank you for writing it!

Aww this story is really good, i luved it keep up the AWESOME work. lols

Some things really are best left behind closed doors. I liked the story and I'm sorry that I didn't review before. I was just so engrossed with it that I forgot.

Go Hitsugaya-taichou.

Kanpai!!

I didn't review after I finished reading because I wanted to read the sequel so sorry about that. This story is just as good!

Well looks I read the fanfics in the wrong order. I read the sequel before going back to this fanfic. Either way, I enjoyed both of them very much. :]

Hrm...well thats an interesting chapter. I'm guessing it's one of those chapters that the story builds on..Which is a good thing. Still waiting for that next fight scene..if it would ever come. :/

As always well done. :]