Reviews for A Day in the life of Shigeru

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Axe 2007-02-18 ch 12, anon.	abuseAn aneurysm huh? Another Nirvana reference possibly? Anyways, 10/10. Great read.
Andrew Joshua Talon 2007-01-09 ch 12,	abuse... Ookay... That was... Interesting. If seriously creepy.
Himonky 2007-01-08 ch 12,	abuseStill hilarious. And if you keep this up it'll remain this way. Update soon. I think I stopped breathing when I read this.
Andrew Joshua Talon 2007-01-08 ch 11,	abuse... ... Dude. Okay. Considering that the LT. Col. character is based off MY MOTHER, it's really disturbing to see something like that. Which I guess you could use, if you want to use my SI character from "Plugsuits" in the fic too. He'd be good for a few "OMFG I SAW MY MOM DOING IT WITH A TRANSEXUAL!" jokes. Aoba: I'M NOT A TRANSEXUAL! Anyway, funny, zany, and disturbing as always. Good work.
dogbertcarroll 2007-01-02 ch 12,	abuseLOL!
Prasiddha 2007-01-02 ch 12,	abuseWell, you're an innovator...I'm sure no one else has ever written some woman's name THAT way. Zeppelin boxers? I've got Pink Floyd boxers! And I love the way you write "hott". It makes me laugh all the time. AND WHAT A TWIST AT THE END!! THE GREATEST WARRIOR!! AND HE WALKS OFF! 'dreams of Metallica'? lmao... It seems that the more plot you have, the less funny it becomes. I'm not saying this chapter wasn't funny (in fact, it was VERY funny). But you need to make it more random and spontaneous. And one of your strengths is that you're able to add little quirks and details which make me laugh my ** off, like the aforementioned 'zeppelin boxers', 'metallica dreams', or 'ted nugent' or 'macaka'. And the fact that I'm a metalhead, makes the band jokes even funnier. KEEP IT UP!
Prasiddha 2007-01-01 ch 11,	abuseOk...this chapter WAS funny...though only the first half was though. It was all laughs until all of a sudden, you had to change the fic into a 'Halo Rant'. Then it got pretty boring...we get the point, Hyuga is a geek, and Halo's beastiary doesn't make scientific sense. Other than that, the first half rocked. I LOVED the "Macaka" bit. Awesome. And I was expecting 'less' plot. What happened there? I was kinda hoping our hero would SOMEHOW fall into a black hole and get transported into the world of the "Happy Tree Friends" or something like that. Anyways, I'm waiting for the new Mad Misato, Keeping It Real, and of course, Reivolution Happy new year
Prasiddha 2006-12-25 ch 1,	abuseDude, you know I usually send you any reviews straight away by email. The only reason I'm reviewing this right here is to get the reviews higher. I'm baffled by the fact that this fic only has 42 reviews. It deserves like 200! Not that this story's bad or anything. On the other hand, this is some of the funniest ** I've ever read in a fanfic. You know from the mail I send you. Anyways, keep the Shigeru "bashing" coming. This stuff is pure classic.
Himonky 2006-12-04 ch 10,	abuseFunny man. Funny . Keep it coming.
Alucard180 2006-12-03 ch 10,	abuse"All I ever wanted to do was live a normal life and not have to pay for sex!” i wish for the same thing, update soon
Andrew Joshua Talon 2006-12-03 ch 10,	abuseWell... You could have started with what I submitted, but this works too. In a zany, twisted sort of way that you like. ^__^ Nice job. Don't suppose you'd like to use the Colonel more? Maybe in continuing to make Shigeru's life miserable for her own twisted amusement? And yours?
dogbertcarroll 2006-12-03 ch 10,	abuseIf you want someone shot in the face call Dick Chaney! Never send the Prez to do the Vice Prez's job!
jmj102 2006-10-21 ch 9,	abusethis > Reivolution
Andrew Joshua Talon 2006-09-25 ch 9,	abuseLOL. Thanks for the shout-out. And the props. Though to be honest, I'm a Penguin 2008 man myself (yes, I am a man. Try not to look surprised). Anyway, Lt. Colonel (FYI, people of this rank are usually addressed as 'Colonel' for short, or LT Colonel) Stewart is an accomplished rotorcraft pilot (everything from Blackhawk helicopters to Osprey tilt-rotors). Her preferred weapon is an FN P90. She also has an annoying habit of humming Vivaldi's music. If Kaoru comes into the story at some point, she should definitely tell him that "Beethoven sucks". Aside from the Bush bashing (I do think he's screwed up, but he's not THAT bad), good work on the chapter. Of course, Annette can act to further mock and humiliate the "assassins" if you wish. Oh, just so you know: The US has officer exchange programs with other nation's militaries, including Canada's. Officers in this program are expected to take orders and give orders as though they were back in their homecountry's military, and even go to war with the nation's military, except against their home nation (of course). However, since Stewart is supposedly dead in "Plugsuits", her being here could just be to try and recruit Shigeru into the anti-SEELE organization she and Kaji are part of. Or, if SEELE is no more, she could just be there for kicks. Entirely up to you, my friend! Keep up the good work!
dogbertcarroll 2006-09-25 ch 9,	abuseSorry the title of WMFA has already been claimed by me! I'm not sure we can award you the title of genius, but rest assured after reading this I am proud to award you the title of 'We're reasonable sure he's not retarded, but he's probably stoned so it's hard to tell.' snicker

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