its beautiful

That was great! Such a cute little ficlet. Not to sugary not to bland and the most important thing: lots of chocolate! YAY! I don't remember reading any grammatical mistakes or anything that read a bit funny. But then again, I was so engrossed in the story that I wouldn't have notice.
You do great WAFF, you should definitely give it another go sometime in the future,
:)
Ana

Cute. I liked it. 10/10 rating.

very sweet...

Aw it's so cute (ok I feel like I'm talking about a bunny). But really it was great and has left me feeling like a marshmellow :)

E! KIREI NA!

Here's a tip - don't use the percentage sign on eff-eff-dot-net. *winks* It gets edited out. There are a bunch of little mistakes here and there that detract from the story, but IT WAS ** BRILLIANT AND PRETTYFULL AND LOVERLY! *.* Liek dat. sparkleh-eyez.

Theobro...thingy? Uh... in English, it's ambrosia? Unless I'm being stupid and there's another word for it...

*nodnod* It was unbeta'ed, but the storyline was worth it. :D I can imagine it happening. (Iwantchocolatenow.) o_o *cough* Ahem, I'll take any kind of candy, actually...xD

So, did you have to research all the different types of chocolate? I mean, wow. ^^;

The title fit, too. :D Everything just came together so neatly. ^^; Well done!

AndIstillwantchocolate. Youoweme. o_o

-Kara

This story was so yummy! In more ways than one. ^_~ This was lovely, really, really well done!

m, chocolate. I can only handle up to 75% dark chocolate myself, but still...

Well written, I loved it :)

*drool* a fanfic centring on Mamoru and chocolate
what could be better?!

nice read, I really liked it