Reviews for When It's Over

badger 2006-08-04 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is looking good, i like the way you have crafted the history and relationship between the brothers! bringing it to current time seems to have worked so far- it'll be interesting to see how you continue! great job and keep it up!
aspfall 2006-05-29 ch 1,	abuseI like your crisp style of writing. It somewhat reminds me of my own. ^-^; And all of your grammar and whatnot is just awesome. Keep up with the good writing techniques! :D