This is nice. ^_^ Funny way to describe heaven, but it's cute.
I was searching for a story that I could use for something we have to make for school, and I found this. Is it okay if I use this story? Please tell me if you aren't, than I'll use something else.

Keep on writing!
X~X~X Celia ~~

OMG! your writing...iwannawritelikeyou!

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:( So good.

Aww, I dont want it to be complete! It seems like it would be a great story to build on!!

AW. THIS IS SO CUTE.

Not fantastically written, but cute. And Adorable. I just want to hug everyone.

'"Hm, guess she was wrong." Collins said, kissing Angel.'

HA. :D

And, yes. Giggle much.

Happy Writing,
Scarfy

Cute. Hah. Candyland.
You did forget about Benny though. Estranged or not, he still exists. I liked Angel and Collins scaring that woman. I'm surprised *she's* in heaven.
I liked the way you described Maureen's death. That seemed so her.

"I don’t know. Clouds. Sunlight. A place that looks like candyland."

Hahahahaha! XD

Funny. I kind of thought the same. O.o

Great work! :)

That was so sweet and funny! Good job!

This made me cry. But in a good way :) aww mark thinks heaven looks like cadyland. thats cute.

Oh, that was nice! I liked it. Good job!

Aw... That was really sweet! I thought it was so funny when they talked about the girl who said they'd go to Hell for being gay. lol. It was touching, and I'm glad everything worked out in the end.