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Faerylark
2009-01-23 . chapter 14
I just have to say that I started reading this fic for the golden pair... but Fuji has completely stolen the show. I love your characterization of him, spot on! I'd love to see more perfect pair now that it's here... lol.
AkinoBekyCarterBakura
2008-12-16 . chapter 14
OO
*adds STory to favs*
I love it! So dramatic, so lovable, so cute, with a great plot, realistic as Dostojevskij, I LOVE IT!
Continue son
pretty much much please!
yllom21
2008-10-21 . chapter 3
Interesing story so far. I'll leave a proper review once I finish.
Amakurikara
2008-08-28 . chapter 13
Are you ever going to update this story? It's so good! I went back and reread it all, b/c I was thinking about it...and it made me sad when I realized that it wasn't completed...please tell me you will be updating this story soon!
Miyavilurver
2008-08-13 . chapter 14
This is such a good fic. (:
Cant wait to see more of it.
Miyavilurver
2008-08-13 . chapter 12
I officially, officially love you. Please, please marry me.
ILOVETHISSTORY.
MizukixYuuta = murderous!Fuji rocks my socks off to outerspace. Like serisouly.
*swoons*
Anyway I love the whole fic so far and the pairings and so much love for it all.
and now to the next chapter!
ulquiorra's girl
2008-06-08 . chapter 14
please update soon i want to know what happens
ScrewyLouie12
2008-05-14 . chapter 14
love it! hope you update
Yanagi-sen
2008-02-07 . chapter 14
I'm just getting into PoT fics now and I really LOVE this one. I'm hoping that someday you might be able to finish it.

PS: I'm hoping your penname is Wolf from KKM. He's my favorite from that show! ^__^
beanstalk1019
2007-10-09 . chapter 14
I've enjoyed your story so much that I feel like I owe you a review.

I love that you pretty much got all the characters right as far as I'm concerned. I hate it when people make Fuji a devil with no redeeming qualities. He may be a bit overprotective and have an odd sense of humor, but he's usually not malicious without a reason. I'm sorry to say that I never did like Mizuki and I couldn't understand why Yuuta was still on speaking terms after he found out what Mizuki had done and after how Mizuki had treated him.

Somehow I knew you would have them all end up in the house after about the fourth person came. It certainly is an interesting situation. I love pictures of them when they're sleeping like when they were at the training camp. I think when Ryoma said Karupin's name in his sleep that must have been the most adorable and endearing thing I've ever seen. I love it when the outwardly tough guys betray their inner sensitivity and when the goofy ones show that they are sensitive and can be serious. So you can understand why Ryoma and Eiji are my two favorite characters with Kaidoh not far behind.

I'm glad you got Taka with someone. I see a bunch of fics where he's the only not gay one and everyone else is paired off. I mean, if things are going to be so unrealistic that so many people find out that they're gay, why not go the whole way? All of them being gay is actually more probable than only one of them not being gay.

I guess Eiji is the first name. I always thought Kikumaru was his first name, but since reading some fanfics, I've gotten really confused and it seems I had it wrong. It's just that guys' first names are usually longer than the last ones or at least around the same length, but Eiji is an exception. I like it either way really.

Good job on the translations. It's so annoying when people use terms then don't explain them. And you managed to mix the serious stuff and the humor well. I don't think a story can be truly good unless it has a serious plotline, but also has humor mixed in. Too many people try just one and unless it's a phenomenal idea, it doesn't work.

I'm looking forward to more Eiji-lovin' so update soon please.

Happy Writing.
Bouncy cat
2007-10-04 . chapter 14
Very cute,
I loved how you got all of them together.
Well written and nice and long story ^_^
Neokstar
2007-08-26 . chapter 14
This is so AWESOME!

I totally love how Eiji and Oishi are so like the GP without playing doubles and how Oishi has to be a motherhen!

-squeals-

xD
IndigoChan
2007-08-14 . chapter 14
Another great chapter! And I loved the truth or dare thingy with Tezuka. =3 Remember to update!
IndigoChan
2007-08-14 . chapter 12
Yay~! You added Mizuki and Yuuta to the story! =^_^= They're one of my favorite couples. :3
Sora Fx
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
Oh, the teARS! Great story!
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