Weird little one-shot I must admit. Lyrics were weird until the end where you said they didn't have anything to do with the story. I can imagine that Inuyasha would do just about that when inhuman form but would do a whole lot worse when in hanyou form. He sure can kick butt! Yeah! Weird but a lot of action!

LOVE IT!

This sort of reminds me of the Nickelback song "Next Contestant"

hey great story update soon please

To be honest with you I wasn't expecting this story to be as great as it actually was. Excellent writing, very descriptive and flowing. A nice and simple scene; I loved how your whole story stayed very organic with the scene (with the bar fight and all); this meaning nothing "crazy" or "out-of-the-blue" happened in this bar. And lastly, very well done characters, it's hard to establish a character in a one-shot fic. But you seem to do this very well. Please keep writing and e-mail me if you have any problems with my review.

I LIKE SO TOTALY LOVED IT GREAT JOD ^O^
~NYA~ they r 1 of my fave anime couple^^

heh. it is okay

i really like this story. lol great job

that was awsum! inuyasha can kick ass while in human form 2~!

I love it! its the best birthday present ever!! I appriciate it and Im so glad you took time out of your life to write this for this lowly one! arigato Mishie!