thanks for the warning, many people just don't warn others. nice story, keep up the work!

WOW.. it took me days to complete reading this story and i only have one world to describe it ... great ... that's it, although i don't understand the last part, you know the mysterious man in the end if he one of the Kaiba brothers alteregos or not related person, but other than that, this is one of the greatest Mokuba and Kaiba fanfiction it's revolve about their relation from many aspects ... and to be honest i cried so hard at the Mkaiba story in the chapters when the Kaibas kept coming from different worlds, i actually cried more the mother part in the latter chapers..

keep the good job.

Wow. It's done.
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AHH! NEED THE NEXT STORY! I NEED IT!!
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Um... Anyways, I loved this fanfic, and I'm looking forward to much more in the future. Well, Part 3... I'll be waiting! =D

Wow, it was a real nice story. ^_^
Whenever you put up the next one, I'll read it.
I was kind'a surprised about Seto selling out to Pegasus. I'd think that Kaiba wouldn't want him to (even when seeing he didn't have the Eye, I'd think he'd still be suspicious). But, at least it turned out to be the right thing to do, since the other man wanted the money.
The kiss was really a shock. I mean, for Joey to do that... That's just weird for him to, unless he wanted to... I mean, you normally wouldn't kiss someone for a joke, right?
As for the guy at the end... I'd naturally assume it's Kaiba or Mokuba, and more specifically, from that last world you mentioned that Kaiba didn't get to explore. But, the "man" and "huddled" words puzzle me. "man" sounds older than Mokuba, and "huddled" sounds more vulnerable than Kaiba. Unless it's one of those world universes or something. But then, it may be someone totally different than the Kaiba brothers. If it was one of them, it may have told... I mean, you'd naturally assume it'd be one of them, but then, why wouldn't it say. So... maybe it's someone else. It's definately something to do with the puzzle, though. Or it should... since it had to do with Yami and the puzzle... (It'd be weird if Atem from the past came... something like that. But then, it wouldn't make since for it to happen at Kaiba's estate - except that Yami sent Mokuba to his brother there, I think.)

KYA! THE END! ... I feel a bit sad now that it's over...

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE SUCH A CLIFFHANGER! That was such a good story! I really liked that way you handeled seto with the business. It would have been a little too unrealistic if he had taken it over and everything had been peachy. I also loved the joey/ kaiba part. It cracked me up and maybe added a bit of foreshadowing...(I love that pair!)So whos the new person? Hm...it came from Yami's puzzle so maybe it's his ancient self...or maybe it's the high priest (basing this on all the other setos that pop up)... I think it's someone from ancient Egypt...(now look what you've done! I'm going to be here guessing untill you come out with SW3. Mini-sequels?!? well heres your request for it!

Really great story, and i love your writing style

Good ending. I have no idea who it could be maybe another Joey. I hope it's not another Seto.

Hey I really like this story!! I love the way both setos interact with one another, but i have to admit i'm worried about what will happen when Kaiba leaves. How can Seto grow up so quickly? I feel bad for Kaiba too! Things are going to be so confusing for him once he returns to his own world! Oh one little suggestion though when reffering to Seto's mother, you always put "The mom", which makes it seem impersonal. "THEIR mom", and "SHE said" would make it sound better rather then the mom said this and the mom did that.

but other than that the story is wonderful, and i love that you update frequently (thankyou!)

Yay! Pegasus! ^_^
I’ve been wondering about the Eye ever since Kaiba first mentioned being nervous about it. Wondering if Pegasus still had Cecelia, just didn’t know how to work the Eye yet, or was all along reading his mind and wondering what all of it meant... It would have been interesting for Pegasus to find out about him kidnapping Mokuba and Kaiba being a Kaiba, and other things, when it’s not true. But, it’s really nice that he has his wife, and even a kid, too, and I’d love to hear more about them and how it’s possible. Pegasus seems like such a nice man. ^_^ I’d also love to have everyone in Kaiba’s world know - it could make Yugi and them think of Pegasus more positively.
I also find the “Mokie likes DM” interesting. Maybe it’s not because Kaiba ruined the game for his brother, but because Mokuba in this world was the one with the interest, and not Seto... That could happen, ya know.
I’d also love to see Seto with the Duel Disk back to normal, and a wild gleam in his eyes as he talks about how awesome it is and how everything works inside it. Hee, hee... You probably won’t do that, but I’d like to see that interest in how it works from last chapter expanded upon, making him finally seem related in some way to Kaiba. And then he’d have an easier time with the business, too.
And... That last line... Makes me wonder if Kaiba and his brother will end up staying in that world and never going home... Their presence could be explained, you know, somehow... But, I kind’a like it when everyone goes back to where they belong. ^_^” Kind’a the main reason I started that new FMA fanfic of mine... Since those brothers stayed in the other dimension, instead of going back home to be with those who care about them. (Heh... They seem so much like Kaiba and Mokuba... Ed, the elder brother, not considering those people in his decision, thinking that since his mom and dad are dead, there’s nothing back in his world for him. And Al, the younger, thinking that as long as he’s with his older brother, he’s happy, but he’d probably rather be with those he considers close friends... Not to mention that Ed doesn’t believe in magic, either. :P )

Good chapter. I'm glad Mokie is showing an interest in the game. I hope Seto can put the duel disk back to gether and maybe be taught how to make them so that he can have his partnership with Pegasus. That would take a lot of pressure off their father.
It's interesting that Pegasus still has his eye, his wife and a kid.

Sorry I didn’t review the last chapter. I tried to right after reading it, but I couldn’t type anything in MS Works, except for deleting and pasting, so... I didn’t want to take the time copying and pasting letters, and next time I was on the computer, I kind’a forgot what I was going to say. ^_^”
I find it kind’a interesting how you have his parents having similar traits to Kaiba’s. In a way it’s odd, but in a way, Seto’s Seto for a reason, right? Gozaburo wasn’t around while they were in the orphanage, so some of Seto’s traits must have been inherited.
I also found it kind’a interesting about Kaiba’s clothes. I mean, I haven’t heard him say anything about where he gets them from, and I’m sure the Battle City jacket was custom made because of the built in communication system and the KC emblem. But, it’s interesting about how you came up with brand names and stuff.
The talk about Seto’s laziness also seemed to stand out... Paying rent to live in his own house? O_O I don’t even do chores... >_> Of course, I’ve never actually had a job... Not that I didn’t try once or twice... I’m too nervous about failing to try much. >_< I kind’a was hoping I’d have more job opportunities besides stores and restaurants after I finally get my degree, but I’m already worried I won’t, since it’s such a small college and I can’t get my preferred program of study.
Anyhow... ^_^” Nice chapter.

Good chapter. I hope Seto can handle this. He is spoiled.

Wow, this story is going great! You've obviously put a lot of thought into the interaction between the characters. *sigh* Seto needs to shape up, though. So whiny. :) Keep up the awesome writing!

Good chapoter. I hope once they get home they will have a new understanding of each other. Mokuba should understand a little more of Kaiba and Kaiba will want to be with him more.
Seto really needs to grow up he is acting so immature.

Hmm... Some interesting stuff in that chapter. I liked the emotion I saw in Kaiba’s eyes when his mother said he wasn’t her son. Also, I kind’a wonder how that Mokuba could be her Mokuba... I mean, who would trick her like that? Gozaburo couldn’t have wanted him. I mean, it’d just be stupid for him to steal a baby for his five-year-old or how ever old Noah was at the time, just because he wanted a little brother or something. It’s risky enough for him to have gotten Noah his pet in recent years. So... who would have arranged for that and why? Especially when he ended up available for the Kaiba’s - whoever took the time to go through with all of that, I’d think they’d want to keep Mokuba.
Chapter seemed a little jumpy once or twice, and the mother seemed too accepting to the other world thing. Guess she may be more willing to believe in magic, with Yugi around, though. Kaiba seemed a tad out of character when competing with Seto for everyone’s company near the end. But I really liked the talks with the mom and some with Angie, and the comparing Seto with Kaiba stuff, along with the interesting questions dealing with Mokuba.