*tearteartear**crycrycry*

but great job

Thta's really cool. I loved that bit in the movie, and always wondered what the people watching must have thought.

I just found so many mistakes in my own story. oh well. Another review for me. Damn. Oh well. I'm too lazy to change it, plus I'm In hawaii. Ach.

There are some lovely ideas and images in this. The last paragraph is beautiful, and I like the thought patterns of this character.

Some of the sentence structure seems a little odd, but apart from that, this was very nice.