Hey, sorry i haven't reviewed before! Pretty cool story ya got here, slam422. It has a few gramatical errors here and there, but that's the only problem i see with it.

anyhoo, from what it looks like, ya want people to send in baddies? um, i'd like to know what elements i'm allowed to use. Let me know soon!

Anyways, keep up the awesome work, and goor luck with the next update! Please update soon, and i'll see ya next time!

-Shining Riku-

hey good job i liked it.

plz check out my mini series of never ending fantasies under Mario

you may injoy it.

it has princess zelda and princess peach in and other disney characters plz check it out

See YAH!

I like this Matt T. guy. He and I sound like we'd have a lot in common.

This seems like an excellent story. I'll keep reading.

Ice demon:

Name: Zidi

Race: Corrupted Human. (alike Mario but slightly altered)

Apearence: Strong sleek body, dark cold eyes, White spikey hair that leans over his left eye.

white bandages wrapped over his hands, and his feet, he drops tempreture around him by 20 degres and breathes mist. He has very definative muscle size and has a silent personality, he usually doesnt speak much not alike the fire demon.

Wow! Great Story!

Hope you update soon!

Just promise me one thing...

REVIEW MY FIC! ...Pretty Please?

Keep it up!

Deanna625

dude! This seems like a really cool story. I'm putting this on story alert.

nice story

Name: Sluffy Ftatic

Race: Ruff Puff

Element: Thunder

Appearance: A gray ruff puff with yellow eyes. He has a faint blue glow around him and sparks come out once in a while.

I would like to have my character be the earth villain. Here is his info.

Name: Arcturus

Race: Koopa

Appearance: a regular koopa with a tan-coloured shell. He wears a wide-brimmed hat with a feather in it, and has a crossbow. He is a hunter, of beasts and intelligent beings. He is very polite, and is not actually evil, he just wants vengeance for some unexplained reason. (Permission for the author to make it up.)