 zutoph507 2008-09-12 . chapter 1I really, really hope that this isn't a one-shot. it's just too good. I want more... please? |
 Sora Keyblader 2008-04-12 . chapter 1I just HAD to read this fic the moment I read the summary.
Zack calling Cloud "Spikey" was just TOO CUTE!! XD |
 Mikun 2008-02-16 . chapter 1 This was very well written! I loved it. =] You wrote this pairing very well, while staying in character. Great job. |
 Kawaii Kisu 2008-02-09 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, I loved this. It was so sad and beautiful! Thank you. |
 DaLizzie 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Poor Cloud, he's always so angsty. Quite an enjoyable fic! ^_^ |
 Ibn-La-Ahad 2007-06-03 . chapter 1This fic actually amde me want to cry. I think my eyes are watery right now.. |
 akatsuki-NIN-itachi 2007-03-14 . chapter 1it was sweet, i love it! |
 Michiko Gatanami 2006-12-20 . chapter 1Wow. This is really a good little shortstory! And I like where it says "As she looked at his face and blue eyes, she wondered faintly how much of the water on his face wasn’t tears." A great deal! I absolutely love it ^_^ |
 Janet0041 2006-10-25 . chapter 1Too short, but so cute... nice history, It tells more than anything! |
 Mister Jackkkk 2006-08-26 . chapter 1aw so sad but I loved it ^_^
this is really good!
Love superjj |
 Shiningstar992 2006-07-23 . chapter 1I feel sorry for Cloud ='|. Awesome job ;-) |
 FoxeyFoxey 2006-07-16 . chapter 1*sniff* Too cute.
~Anan |
 alex.barista 2006-05-29 . chapter 1oh my
this ish so sad T^T great job i cannot wait for the next chapter.. |
 Aseret Kitsune 2006-05-25 . chapter 1This was so sad and wonderful. Great job. I love the details and flow. Hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2. |