Interesting on how the second read through can make you realise how much the characters love each other. Warm and fuzzy with punk stitched hearts. Well done. Request for more.

Wow. You write beautifully and I love how you portrayed Reno and Rufus. Fantastic job on this fic.

I love it keep it coming. I want to see those leaflets too. *pouts*

E! This one made me laugh! I liked it a lot. I was weirded out by the random things Reno was shouting, but I thought it was hillarious, and thought 'Hey! Our Reno would SURE do that.' It was awesome and I can't wait for more!! WOO!

Cait Sith ~_^

EH?! This chapter freaked me out! I thought he was gunna die >.< I was like 'NU! Don't kill Rufus...Yourself...' But He's alive! Just barely, but he's alive! Very nicely done!

Cait Sith ~_^

Hm. Rufus is sort of...He does not like to listen to reason. I love it! And you made Reno look smart...I alwyas thought Reno was an idiot...You made him look REALLY smart. It was awesome!

Cait Sith ~_^

Oh, so mysterious! Makes me wonder who it is! Well...sort of. It looks good so far, Rufus, Sir!

Cait Sith ~_^

XD AWESOME RUFUS! Totally floating MY boat!

BUt hey you're imbarassing me yo ^^;; I mean sure I mean all those things but hey.. it's all... you know... between you an' me. An' I thought you were out for the count yo! YOU TOLD ME YOU DIDN'T HEAR ME! XD It was the Tseng wearing a Hawaiian T-Shirt wasn't it? I knew that'd get you up!

PS: WRITE MORE!

~Reno

I loved that last chapter, it had so much emotion in it. It embodied the Rufus/Reno relationship perfectly. And I don't care what you say, this entire fic is reflective upon you. I hope the next chapter is just as fufilling, I always enjoy a good read.
-Shotgun
Ps: Can I have a ransom cameo, even if I just bring you tea or something?

I have a sudden urge to see this mythical Tseng in a hawaiian shirt.

It took me awhile to get used to the European style quotation marks ((damn those years of fanfics using them to indicate thoughts-- I found myself wondering if Reno and you were telepathic for a bit there, Shacho.)) but otherwise it's a wonderful study of character. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this; I love the interaction.

- Elena -

Good job! It's wonderful.

Fantastic chapter!

It's taken me forever to review for this, as I can never find the time to do ** anymore, but I wanted to let you know that I'm absolutely BESOTTED with this story! I've pimped it to several of my friends, and THEY love it.

So, please! Update soon!

I thought you had fogotten all about that Shacho, let alone hear me talking to you.. You looked worse then the blackend corpses on the way up. I love the imagery. I guess the files and the witness recollections of actually being there can bring it back to you pretty hard.

Hey... sorry about the weekend.. I'll make it up to you tonight after work. Candles, red wine on the balcony and stawberries will be waiting for you at midnight alright?

Promises I can keep, watching you sleep,

Reno

very well written. I like the in depth on Rufus's character and his insomnia (as a fellow insomniac ^^)
I shall be eagerly awaiting your next chapter