that story is beyond sick and disgusting you have corrupted the wonderful characters of Darien nd Serena turning them into a bunch of incestial(if such a word exists and if it doesnt well it does now) creepoids. take it off or you might further corrupt them. Please in future resist any notions or thoughts of turning the none related lovers into incestors

Is that story true? I like it! its really nice. You seem to be a great writer!

I've read that kind of story here in the Philippines. This time, it's true. That was one of the story in Philippine Ghost story... Anywayz, the story was touching.

Hi! I don`t speak much english bur i`m practicing and I read your fic, well, it is not common but is good, Darien in love with serena? and are they brothers? wow, great! but Was serena in love with him? I understood she wasn´t, and well I told you, it is not common, good luck!
(I hope, you undertand me jeje)

My, my! Konichi wa my lil sis! I see you've been busy and been struck with (or probably throwed at.. *.*)the boot called 'inspiration'. Bwehehe... I liked your fic...it was original, though I'm not sure of how you 'word'ed it. Maybe you coud S-T-R-E-T-C-H it out a little.. put a little more... angst? Still, me and the entire clan (extended family and insects..>bleah< included ) are proud of you! Keep up the good ideas and we'll keep rootin you on! Woohh! I think I saw a pocky under the bed last night.. well, I thought it was pocky, didn't taste like it though... But maybe that was because I ate another bad Tuna before I went to bed..? Bad Tuna! Bad Tuna!!

Hehe.. I dunno what I'm saying.. my mind's been off to LaLa Land these past couple of days.. well, more than usual, I guess (hovering between sanity and a one way trip to the nut house!). You know I have my moments! >dresses up as banana and does the Macarena<

Oh yeah...Mama Felfel' here somewhere... probably writing more CCS fanfics... check her out.. I have her name listed on my favorite author lists...

Now, for more serious matters... I WANT A REVIEW TOO!

Review me or you'll regret it! Don't force me!! I got all 8 dada's on speed dial and I'm not afraid to use it!

BWAHAHHA!

...miss you! bwehehe...

-Ren@ Jewel$

um, it was ok, but they were never brother and sister, and it was kinda wierd no offense! It was still very well written! Just like your Harry Potter story! write more of that! that is THE best d/h i've ever read! even better than the one I attempted years ago!

This story was really good.I would love it if you did a sequel to it,yeah that would be really cool.

Vicangel

Uhm...you know brothers and sisters falling in love is called incest...??
I don't know...I mean Serena and Darien are not meant to be siblings...they're lovers!
Good writing style though..

I am so sorry for going off like this but uh... SERENA AND DARIEN ARE MOST DEFONITLY LOVERS AND HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT THEY ARE BROTHER AND SISTER AND THAT DARIEN DIED IN A CAR ACIEDENT OR THAT HE EVEN DIDED IN THE FIRST PLACE! But if they were brother and sister it would have been a great story if you would have left out the Darien kissing Serena thing!:) BUT THE STORY IS STILL FREAK'N MESSED UP! no offens! ^_^

wat! that was just really weird. i mean y would u make them sister and brother. kinda gross, don't u think. omg, that was just weird. eww!!

oh goodness that was sad

Darien and Serena?
he is such a sweet brother ~
brothers and sisters? lovers?
then he dies?
wosh just a rush of emotions

wow if only he didn't die, how would they react
when they find out about their past lives?

good job ^^
i liked it
in a way it's sweet too