What? WHAT? WHAT? WHAT? WHAT? WHAAAT? WHAAAAAAAT? ohhhh... that's my reaction to this story, almost every line in this story until the last paragraph.

Wow... That was humongously amusing and very insightful, especially loved the way you managed to peg Rufus in 2 lines flat

LOL! Brilliant! I was wondering what was going on until i read the end. Every person's nightmare was great and I especially love Ron's as it was a double nightmare (getting hurtled into space by his gf's father and then coming back and realizing every one of his friends and family were turned into monkies...lol!)

Hilarious! But stil have to ask,What were you eating before you dreamed this up?

another great FF, interesting watching that most of peoples nightmares involves ron, i would like to see other characters nightmares too like wade, drakken, shego and more

couldnt get the idea of what was happening til kp's father nightmare

Dear MrDrP

First I want to thank you for explaining what I didn’t understand before I reviewed this fanfic; though maybe you can make it clearer that the events were nightmares induced by bad food.

Anyway, this is a strange but well-written story. The quality is good; good narration, suspense, mystery and intensity and humor.

The characters are done pretty well too.

Barkin’s nightmare was weird, but amusing and the sort of nightmare Barkin would have; Ron and he switch roles. Very creepy; for Barkin I mean.

Kim’s nightmare is very clever and my favorite one. Kim has lost her abilities, and is captured by Shego and Ron (who has become evil. And Ron has a cruel plan for her (mind control her and make her due his bidding: wearing clothes that are gaudy and throw her own stuff away). So the Drama.

James Possible’s nightmare didn’t attract me, though I will admit it makes sense why you did that kind of nightmare for him.

Ron’s nightmare fits him very well.

Rufus’s nightmare may have been very short, but it fits him very well.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive; certain details are handled well and the mature references are handled well.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review has a good influence on you.

Data Seeker

Wow I love this story. I didn't get it at first and was wondering if it was some kind of alternate universe but I really like it! This really seems like these people's worst nightmares. Bonnie's might be fun as well, although I could not imagine her eating at Bueno Nacho. Well, I could imagine Mr. Dr. P. doing that either, but he might have picked that up. Overall I really like the way the story shows people's worst fears.

Brilliantly crafted. Some obvious inversions, other nightmares, a top reference in a sweet little package. I half-thought it would Ron writing fanfics. Good work.

I must say i liked the random conglomeration of nightmares

*points a finger* Haw Haw!

LOL! Everyone is having a 'good' time...right...I blame Ned! LOL! Pretty scary nightmares you got there.

Danny

Short, simple, and Funny. Awsome.

haha...ur one shots are awesome...my favourite was chapter 5 ...short sweet and the prb the funniest lol...

MrDrP,

While this was another work of genius on your part, I have to stop and wonder if your body had been possesed by Rod Serling as this was being typed.

This was just too creepy...and that's just the way it's supposed to be!

Well done, once again.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

That was very well written. It took me a while to figure out what was going on, but the last part with Ned helped me put it all together. Good job, the Ron ending was indeed better than the Planet of the Apes so my hat is off to you. And I know that this review is about a year late, but still good job.

Always at the Author's Side,

The Real Sidekick

P.S. The KP/Enterprise story is top notch, keep up the good work.