aww. its so sad. but I still loved it.

sweet. .

It's very good, please continue if your going too.

I think you did a pretty good job of portaying Raishinshi. The ending was very cute as well. By the way, I like your titling trend. _

... XD ... *knows it's a serious fic but* ... why does rai remind shi so much of a faithful puppy who's trying too hard? But yesh, this is Raishinshi. VERY VERY IC. Kinda makes Shi wonders if you'd get around to doing POV from EVERYONE in the Ki-family, pard. (and shi'd betcha rp bucks that you'd do it just as IC and GOOD)

Awww...there HAS GOT to be MORE Raishinshi fics written! I loved dat! *is a major Raishinshi fangirl*

Wow! an other Raishinshi fanfic! normaly you don't see a lot of Raishinshi stories out there (even on Chinese HE sits) nice job tough, if Raishinshi is as hot headed as a hot potato, then this fanfic is boiling water (okay that didn't make sense, haha ;)

I write stories around 1 AM, too. _ That is the time when I'm feeling the most light-headed, so my soul leaves my body and I channel a character. Writing by candlelight works well, too. _ The flames give me a certain spiritual energy. I use as much energy as possible when performing tasks. I'm writing this review by candlelight. Nice job!

I curse your ability to write Raishinshi better than I can. Curse you! ... but great fic other than my cursing you, yeshums. Why is it that the best writing seems to come in the wee hours of the morning hm?

So sweet! _ Sounds just like how Raishinshi would sound like, with the slurring and the loopy inorganised way he talks and everything! *gratefully* Finally, another Raishinshi fic.. he's so underrated, not to mention cute and funny and loveable... That's it, we need more Raishinshi ficcies! *rants and raves*

Aww! *sparkles* *_* Pardy should write more, yes she should. XD *pompoms* :D