Please try to hurry!

I Like it! What did Sasuke have in his pocket? The world will never know! lol, jk

PLEASE hurry and continue this story. It's AWESOME! I repeat AWESOME!

This is a great story! WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IT YET? It's practically been FOREVER! SORRY but how DARE you not continue it!

can you make more cps?(chapters)...

Update, okay?

Oh, one thing,check your grammar because there are parts in the story

that I couldn't understand due to the grammatical mistakes... But, it's all good!

ok this story rocks and uh there were lil mistakes but its pretty good otherwise and yes sasuke never not even once in his whole life smiled.

intersting plot it sound good! spell chekc though _

Pretty Funny..I like that/:)

Koolio chappie:D:D I swear, ur now one of my FAVORITE authors:D Seriously:P:P Please post more:D:D

There were a lot of gramatical errors. You might want to proof read the next chapter before you post it. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just pointing it out!

nice try on this story! using the words we have learned, huh? nwei, check some of your words, yeah, they were misspelled. Also about the days of the week, i think apostrophes weren't needed anymore. hehe.. peace.-cielo here.

This is an interesting storyline... But you need to watch your grammar. There are some really big grammatical mistakes in this.

Keep in mind:

Tenses

Difference between 'in', 'on' and 'at'

Comma use

Use of '-teme' as a suffix

Plurals

Use of apostrophes

Just some friendly advice, please don't be mad at me for it: Get a Beta-reader.

Nice story! You're really making it so cliffie! I can't wait for the next part!

And...uhmm...I just can't help it... when Naruto saw Sasuke and Sakura together...shouldn't he have gone well...berserk at the thought that his self-proclaimed **MY SAKURA-CHAN** is with his rival/bestfriend? Just wondering...

And another thing too...exactly what part of the real-Naruto story is yours? I mean like how old are they and stuff...

I hope you won't get mad at me! hihihishh...I'm just so curious about things... and hey..curiosity kills the cat! ehehe...I might be dead by now!

Update soon!

. c",) ƒùù-chan!

Nikki m.