God does try to rouse people to do His work. And it isn't unusual to get 2 or 3 going.

Yes I do believe we can reached out like that occasionally. Well done. Again pithy and to the point but excellent metaphors and well chosen adjectives and adverbs. you write a story that captures the imagination and tells everything in just a few words. thats quite a gift.

Sad but well done! And showing more than a slight awareness of freezing to death.

You have the beginings of a wonderful story line. Keep it up.

Really moving story. You have a fantastic (if somewhat dark!) style and I really hope you post more Mag 7 stories on this site. Can't resist a bit of JD angst, me!