Awe! That was really adorable:) I simply loved it:)

-Lynn

aw i absolutally love it! ;)

Aw, this was sweet too. I liked what Fred said at the end, it was so like him. Great job.

Great work

Aw, this was so cute!

OMG! That was soo awsome! Good job! :D

Aww, so fluffy and cute. And a little funny near the end. I think you made me kind of wish I had Fred there for a while. Lol. Pretty gosh darn good writing when you can do that to a reader. Welp, absolutely smashing good! Keep it up.

-Sam

Very cute story! Very descriptive. :)

Sweet! Fred is just so damn sexy!

Ahh such a cute story. I love the description, it's so detailed. One thing, really small I promise, you say "Moving her hand of his arm," I think you meant to say 'off' instead 'of.' Sorry I couldn't resist, typos bug me, I do them myself so I'm not taking anything away from the story, it was written really well. You have talent, keep it up.

ahh! that was just too cute! i love how hermione described him with so much detail! hehe wonderful job :D