Woah. Wasn't expecting that, but ok. : )

"Her hair had enough twigs in it to fuel a bonfire" hilarious when taken literally...maybe her neck will break?
And the purple eyes...they always have them...why god why?

One plot flaw though...do you really think the wraiths will be able to stand her?

HA! Take that Marry Sue!

Well, this is much better than some of the other stories I have read. There is quite a bit of repitition that is not necessary. The writing style is definately very modern, but that in and of itself is not a bad thing; depends on your goal. This could also benefit from some punctuation editing.

It looks like your writing is improving, which is the point of continuing, no? I would still like to see some of the earlier stories revamped.

Ha. Serves the Sue right. I wish the Nine were still around to do that to all the Sues...

take that, sue!

'Adelaide, or Addi, was a tragic character.' *snort* Such a nice beginning... 'But first, she was beautiful.' Even better! Eyes like *purple* Noldor jewels. LOL! I remember reading fics where the uh... characters had purple eyes. Urgh...
'Evil consumed her body, leaving only a shadow and her lust for the One Ring.' Yes! Loved that line. Have never read any of your stories before, but I enjoyed your prose here.

Huh... interesting... I like it a lot... I knew something was off about the Destiny thing... anyway Write more Stories/oneshots luv!
Kalle