Wow.



There's not much more to say. Just, wow! This was beautiful, in a morbid sort of fashion, but beautiful nonetheless. You are a truly talented writer. And I loved the reference to Ozymandias. My favorite poem, by the way, and suitable for this story. Wonderful job. Keep it up in the future.

Amazing story, and I've only just found this, you really deserve more reviews for this!

Beautifully written

Awesome story. I love the way you portryed both Hiei and Mukuro. They were completly in character. And I love the whole scene you created. It was so beautiful, so truthful, so in their eyes. I loved it. ^__^

Beautiful. You got Hiei and Mukuro down pat- the way they each see the world, the way each does battle. I think you got to the heart of this pairing.

Stunningly beautiful job. I'm very impressed, it's hard to write with characters like Hiei and Mukuro sometimes, and you did an amazing job.

Beautiful work.

that was pretty good, very vivid...

very nice story! the first
HieixMukuro story I've
ever liked actually!

**tilts head** I think the titles' supposed to be Ozymandi/a/s, but other than that...
Lovely, Kowa', simply lovely. A bit more morbid than your usual work, but still awesome.
Check ya later,
Cathy @~;~

X3 I like how you managed to take the scene in a more unique setting, where Hiei and Mukuro are waking up from a battle instead of a random confrontation in her chambers. XD Points for more originality.

And again, I like how you added depth and thought into the piece. Your fics are quite thought provoking and they're a very good read. ^^ I like them a lot, Kowareta, and I still have the firm belief that you are one helluva writer. xD Great job.

Hey, a fic! ^_^ I like it. It's wordy. Heh. I'm just slightly confused about the setting. Where's the story take place? It seems like some random battlefield to me. Hee.

Another beautiful story. And I think I might be the first to review. I love how your able to get across the clossness of Hiei and Mukuro through their battles and their views of the world. Especially how this story can be so cute when it's actually fairly gory. xD I love your stories, Kowareta