 Todd B. James 2006-05-26 . chapter 1Sweet. First review.
Awesome sonnet. Somehow, you made the Legend of Sol-tar [/Aqua Teen reference] seem like an epic worthy of a Braveheart-esque movie. The suits denoting their role in the kingdom was brilliant. I've always wondered what significance they held, and I suppose this is as satisfying and entertaining an explanation as I'll ever get.
The way you ended it was brilliant, too. All the cards are on the stacks at the end, therefore they are all equal. "Noble or common, all dried in the sun," is a perfect visual of both the battlefield's aftermath and the Solitaire endgame.
As with all of your video game sonnets, awesome work. Keep it up. I want to see what you'd be able to do with Pinball. ^_^ |